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loud clubbin (Free verse) by ay deee
its friday now
and when i go out
i wanna hit the dance floor
i wanna be the last out the door
cut a rug so thick
i can't see my pants no more
i can't show enough fine
appreciation for a quick high hat skat
i won't even begin to believe the bassline
i won't even leave the hardwood
til the lights are on and the tender's shoutin but
i don't move as much if the songs aren't good
i don't care for gender roles, fights, or mate scoutin
shut the windows if this is where the cops are at
i wanna pump my fist and play my hit list
its friday and now i'm gonna do just that
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9383
Posted: September 16, 2005 10:06 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2005 10:06 AM PDT
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I enjoyed this.
like dancing i'm dancing up such a storm
that my legs disappear into the rug
so i can't see my pants
glad you enjoyed