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loud clubbin (Free verse) by ay deee

its friday now and when i go out i wanna hit the dance floor i wanna be the last out the door cut a rug so thick i can't see my pants no more i can't show enough fine appreciation for a quick high hat skat i won't even begin to believe the bassline i won't even leave the hardwood til the lights are on and the tender's shoutin but i don't move as much if the songs aren't good i don't care for gender roles, fights, or mate scoutin shut the windows if this is where the cops are at i wanna pump my fist and play my hit list its friday and now i'm gonna do just that

tianyi 16-Sep-05/10:33 AM
The relationship between thick cut rug and invisible trousers is intriguing. Do you wear the rug like a large conical skirt?

I enjoyed this.




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