so i'm not doing a shit job, but i am writing from the perspecitve of one who does a shit job
and it's not so much the amount of money in the poem, but what is being done with it that is important.
maybe you should deepen your definition of deeper.
in this poem, i did go for that rhyme pattern
this is not my line of work
visual art is my line of work, mostly sculpture
writing is a roundabout way of sifting ideas for me
but thank you for your consideration, and if you have anything constructive to say about my writing, i would greatly appreciate that sentiment as well.
i was told by sculpture advisors to take my writing somewhere where people who knew things about writing could help (not sculptors).
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you're not so thick, you almost get it.
so i'm not doing a shit job, but i am writing from the perspecitve of one who does a shit job
and it's not so much the amount of money in the poem, but what is being done with it that is important.
maybe you should deepen your definition of deeper.
why do you ask?
Personally, I think you should consider another line of work.
this is not my line of work
visual art is my line of work, mostly sculpture
writing is a roundabout way of sifting ideas for me
but thank you for your consideration, and if you have anything constructive to say about my writing, i would greatly appreciate that sentiment as well.
i was told by sculpture advisors to take my writing somewhere where people who knew things about writing could help (not sculptors).
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