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sap's pay (Free verse) by ay deee

cleanin out shit traps all day no way sortin out bit scraps all grey no play waddya say we send away and order up some treasure maps

ay deee 9-Oct-05/11:02 AM
in this poem, i did go for that rhyme pattern
this is not my line of work
visual art is my line of work, mostly sculpture
writing is a roundabout way of sifting ideas for me
but thank you for your consideration, and if you have anything constructive to say about my writing, i would greatly appreciate that sentiment as well.
i was told by sculpture advisors to take my writing somewhere where people who knew things about writing could help (not sculptors).




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