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a skinny man on the dock (Free verse) by ay deee
crumpled paper bag
styro chicken napkin
greasy under fingernails
i hate lettuce
roast beef and tomato cheese
smell like a carbon fryer
coffee smoke
hand resting on oiled wood planks
dripping slow
pooling into dusty boots
planted
like shaolin ninja on pole
i am balance
i am alert
aware
i will strike
cheesy fries
gobbled garbage
filly dilly bacon wrapped
filtered water
organically packaged sandwich platter
salmon garlic smashy sausage
seven word samples
shop slice butter cracker
mixed green scooter
chew chew
slurpie magic
mints and picks and cups with ice
syrupy slime rubs shoulders
saggy suit in the sunny sun
glasses slide away
eyes blur
a clean blade
a sharp palm
directed force
sweeps all opponents
on the thread the nut tightens
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10065
Posted: October 17, 2005 8:58 AM PDT; Last modified: October 17, 2005 8:58 AM PDT
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