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a skinny man on the dock (Free verse) by ay deee

crumpled paper bag styro chicken napkin greasy under fingernails i hate lettuce roast beef and tomato cheese smell like a carbon fryer coffee smoke hand resting on oiled wood planks dripping slow pooling into dusty boots planted like shaolin ninja on pole i am balance i am alert aware i will strike cheesy fries gobbled garbage filly dilly bacon wrapped filtered water organically packaged sandwich platter salmon garlic smashy sausage seven word samples shop slice butter cracker mixed green scooter chew chew slurpie magic mints and picks and cups with ice syrupy slime rubs shoulders saggy suit in the sunny sun glasses slide away eyes blur a clean blade a sharp palm directed force sweeps all opponents on the thread the nut tightens

Dovina 17-Oct-05/7:10 PM
May I steal your last line? It's great - could use it in lots of places. But it doesn't seem to fit here.




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