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Half of All My Lies are True (Free verse) by Enkidu
Half of all my lies are true And half of those are honest too Close your eyes and I may see The flavors that you speak to me Let it go so it will come Reflect a product of the sum Say that you will see me through And I will disappear for you I only lie to let you know How honestly my feelings show

Up the ladder: REM Sleep
Down the ladder: I am a Man

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.3073616
Overall Rank: 3641
Posted: May 11, 2004 10:12 PM PDT; Last modified: December 31, 2005 12:29 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 209.247.222.97 | 1-Jan-06/7:40 AM | Reply
I know a passionate man who speaks in apparent lies and nonsense to let me know his feelings, because feelings mean more to him than making sense. If this is something like what you want to say, I think you could refine it into something more compelling.
[4] ay deee @ 67.52.35.3 | 4-Jan-06/11:30 AM | Reply
quite confused, and not connvinced by the rhymes
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