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Half of All My Lies are True (Free verse) by Enkidu Half of all my lies are true
And half of those are honest too
Close your eyes and I may see
The flavors that you speak to me
Let it go so it will come
Reflect a product of the sum
Say that you will see me through
And I will disappear for you
I only lie to let you know
How honestly my feelings show
Up the ladder:
I never really knew
Down the ladder:
Toku
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Posted: May 11, 2004 10:12 PM PDT; Last modified: December 31, 2005 12:29 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.3073616 Overall Rank: 3641 Comments:
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Dovina @ 209.247.222.97
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1-Jan-06/7:40 AM
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I know a passionate man who speaks in apparent lies and nonsense to let me know his feelings, because feelings mean more to him than making sense. If this is something like what you want to say, I think you could refine it into something more compelling.
quite confused, and not connvinced by the rhymes
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