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Free verse № 101524

Half of All My Lies are True

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 May 2004 · Edited 31 Dec 2005 · 2 comments

Half of all my lies are true And half of those are honest too Close your eyes and I may see The flavors that you speak to me Let it go so it will come Reflect a product of the sum Say that you will see me through And I will disappear for you I only lie to let you know How honestly my feelings show

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[7] Dovina 1-Jan-06/7:40 AM Reply
I know a passionate man who speaks in apparent lies and nonsense to let me know his feelings, because feelings mean more to him than making sense. If this is something like what you want to say, I think you could refine it into something more compelling.
[4] ay deee 4-Jan-06/11:30 AM Reply
quite confused, and not connvinced by the rhymes