| Re: War by zodiac |
6-Aug-05/4:52 AM |
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I knew it was about your wife...good wives like to keep alot of one or two things just incase there is a bread shortage...yeast being one of them lol...you made me look in my cupboards to see what I have ALOT of lol...looks like its jello and macaroni..I love this poem...
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| Re: Letter Number One by not_a_philosopher |
5-Aug-05/8:40 PM |
I have read this poem 4 times...it sounds really neat...then you loose me...I think I might be thinking to much...you think...
Sounds like your argeuing with yourself...Bethy:)
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| Re: Philosophy King by crooked_smile |
5-Aug-05/8:37 PM |
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I like this...many different meanings...for me...of course, I am deep anyway..lol
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| Re: Fairies by whispern_smoke_wisp |
5-Aug-05/8:35 PM |
when I was a little girl, my grams said if you look very carefully you can see where the faries have hung out their laundry all over the lawn...and sure enough I did...of course now I tell my little girl the same...look in the morning where the dew hangs on little spider webs...it looks like canopys of laundry...
Beautiful...thanks for bringing back an old memory :) :) Bethy
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| Re: The One by RGSsparky |
5-Aug-05/8:27 PM |
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very nice...sweet actually...Bethy:)
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| Re: first poem of the new year by that_funny_girl |
5-Aug-05/3:10 PM |
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ummmmm you wrote this poem...thats a great start...
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| Re: The Beatles by i_am_the_popsicle |
5-Aug-05/2:39 PM |
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We all live in a yellow submarine...I,ll see you there...people have become too lost in what is not available...Good poem... Bethy :)
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| Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
5-Aug-05/2:27 PM |
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Thank you Dovina...a poem like this one has a flow of its own...so i went with the flow...and your right...forcing it would have made it unreal...Bethy :)
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| Re: a comment on The Stone Man by Bethy |
5-Aug-05/12:11 PM |
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Thank you Broken...yes I do know, and I am pleased to see you noticed... Bethy ;)
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| Re: a comment on Vain Moment by Bethy |
5-Aug-05/12:06 PM |
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Thank you Broken...Cheers!!! Bethy:)
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| Re: a comment on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy |
5-Aug-05/12:04 PM |
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hehehe...its a secret....right!!! thanks Bethy:)
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| Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
5-Aug-05/12:02 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
5-Aug-05/12:01 PM |
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Yes Broken...it is sad...sad everyday... Bethy:)
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| Re: Iâd Kill Your Dog For Respect by Crann Mascher |
5-Aug-05/11:51 AM |
lost for words here...but... yep I like this poem...
Bethy :)
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| Re: All are welcomed. by darby pyn |
5-Aug-05/11:44 AM |
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Holy frig...lol...I had to get me a dictionary for some of them big words...but it works for me...awesome...I think like you write...lol...ooops just had an insane moment...lol Bethy:)
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| Re: In My Words by RGSsparky |
5-Aug-05/7:11 AM |
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| Re: You can never go back! by pennymarie |
5-Aug-05/7:09 AM |
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Think before you speak, right...or just think it really loud in your head !!! Bravo,good one! Bethy :)
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| Re: Not in The Classroom by Gbaddy Faggy |
5-Aug-05/7:06 AM |
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I love the word...unperturbed...Bethy :)
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| Re: Tangled web. by darby pyn |
5-Aug-05/7:03 AM |
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I had to read this poem a couple of times...but I like it...Bethy
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| Re: A Night at the Move-ies by Crann Mascher |
5-Aug-05/7:02 AM |
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I love your poetry...your my hero...LOL Bethy :)
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