| Re: Mavis Beacon, Human. by Crann Mascher |
5-Aug-05/7:00 AM |
Are you accepting any patients...sometimes I just need to spit it all out there...lol...boy do I need to get away...I got the single Mom syndrome blues...hmmm sounds like another poem for me...lol
Excellent!! Bethy
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| Re: Pilfered Pancakes, Broken Trust by Crann Mascher |
5-Aug-05/6:54 AM |
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I love this...so imaginative and creative...I think I peeeeeed myself... Bethy :)
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| Re: The Edge is Better Blue by D. $ Fontera |
5-Aug-05/6:50 AM |
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there is a fine line between love and hate...hmmm...life is a prism of color...ironically the edges of a prism are all blue...this is what I saw in your Cinquain...good job... Bethy :)
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| Re: Sand by toward |
4-Aug-05/2:57 PM |
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sand is hard to walk in sometimes eh...but we all do it... Bethy :)
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| Re: THINK ABOUT ME by prettyktm |
4-Aug-05/2:47 PM |
Is this a dream-state, a lonesome trick of the mind, sounds like the separation of two loves searching for a reason to be togeather...
good poem...Bethy :)
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| Re: a comment on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy |
4-Aug-05/2:42 PM |
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Thank you toward...yes abstract...its like eating a peanut butter sandwich without tastebuds...lol...its like seeing something, and not saying it outloud...so your eyes are speaking in your mind... Bethy :)
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| Re: Disregard the first line of this poem by T. Jonathron Remp |
4-Aug-05/1:47 PM |
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WOW!!! excellent ! Now you got me thinking... Ok...there is no beginning and there is no end :)
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| Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy |
4-Aug-05/1:42 PM |
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Thank you Penny... and yes life can be very FULL at times... Bethy :)
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| Re: Never born. by | Broken | |
4-Aug-05/12:08 PM |
very deep...
Life is not too short...its the longest thing we have to do...
Good poem
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| Re: Coffee Incorrectly by gregsamsa222 |
4-Aug-05/12:01 PM |
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| Re: untitled by AaronJKeating |
3-Aug-05/3:43 PM |
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| Re: On the Discovery of Hats and a Jaunting Ogre by MacFrantic |
3-Aug-05/3:38 PM |
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I think limerick,s are funny and yours are fun...wtg :)
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| Re: No More Tomorrows by PoeticOne |
3-Aug-05/3:28 PM |
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This is good...hmmmm sadness,hurt,pain,lost love...yup...all the right ingredients to make me feel this poem... :)
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| Re: Drops of Pain by PoeticOne |
3-Aug-05/3:24 PM |
The only thing I have to offer for a comment is...I have chocolate..and am willing to share... :)
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| Re: Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp |
3-Aug-05/3:16 PM |
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Mr.T Your potato with words is exactly potato...potato rhythm, truely potato unique...Bravo! :)
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| Re: a comment on Vain Moment by Bethy |
3-Aug-05/3:09 PM |
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Yes I did enjoy this one, I wrote it in about 5 minutes...I woke one morning sitting upside down I believe...hehaha! Thank you
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| Re: a comment on Vain Moment by Bethy |
3-Aug-05/3:07 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy |
3-Aug-05/3:03 PM |
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Thankyou for your great comments :)
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| Re: a comment on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy |
3-Aug-05/3:01 PM |
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| Re: Interstellar Planetary Escape Plan by drnick |
3-Aug-05/10:46 AM |
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Sounds like an escape from the reality of Divorce...been there... Bethy
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