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THINK ABOUT ME (Free verse) by prettyktm
Think about me When you'll close your eyes Think about my love How they use to make you feel alright Things have changed now Yeah,I can understand But don't fade me Like a dream fades When we open our eyes Think about me When you dance Think about my hands Which used to touch you down Think about me When you sleep on the bed All alone,how lonely You tell me That you don't need me But I know you're all gone Coz,your hands keep on moving All over the bed Searching for my body there But the ego of yours Won't let your mind think Your heart beats louder Like an un-answered telephone ring You tell me That you don't need me But I know what you're going through Just call me and I've be there Coz,I still love you.

Up the ladder: A Lover's Lament
Down the ladder: Looking Up

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8660
Posted: August 4, 2005 1:11 AM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2005 1:11 AM PDT
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[6] Bethy @ 24.222.32.157 | 4-Aug-05/2:47 PM | Reply
Is this a dream-state, a lonesome trick of the mind, sounds like the separation of two loves searching for a reason to be togeather...
good poem...Bethy :)
[n/a] prettyktm @ 203.115.81.186 > Bethy | 4-Aug-05/10:22 PM | Reply
Hi,thank you so much for this lovely comment.This is the first time on this site,I have receive a good comment for my work.other
wise.Some of my fellow readers,just passed on some nasty comments
without any reason.Some people just love to hate.But as a writer
I welcome all kinds of comments.take care.
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