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THINK ABOUT ME (Free verse) by prettyktm
Think about me
When you'll close your eyes
Think about my love
How they use to make you feel alright
Things have changed now
Yeah,I can understand
But don't fade me
Like a dream fades
When we open our eyes
Think about me
When you dance
Think about my hands
Which used to touch you down
Think about me
When you sleep on the bed
All alone,how lonely
You tell me
That you don't need me
But I know you're all gone
Coz,your hands keep on moving
All over the bed
Searching for my body there
But the ego of yours
Won't let your mind think
Your heart beats louder
Like an un-answered telephone ring
You tell me
That you don't need me
But I know what you're going through
Just call me and I've be there
Coz,I still love you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8583
Posted: August 4, 2005 1:11 AM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2005 1:11 AM PDT
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good poem...Bethy :)
wise.Some of my fellow readers,just passed on some nasty comments
without any reason.Some people just love to hate.But as a writer
I welcome all kinds of comments.take care.