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THINK ABOUT ME (Free verse) by prettyktm

Think about me When you'll close your eyes Think about my love How they use to make you feel alright Things have changed now Yeah,I can understand But don't fade me Like a dream fades When we open our eyes Think about me When you dance Think about my hands Which used to touch you down Think about me When you sleep on the bed All alone,how lonely You tell me That you don't need me But I know you're all gone Coz,your hands keep on moving All over the bed Searching for my body there But the ego of yours Won't let your mind think Your heart beats louder Like an un-answered telephone ring You tell me That you don't need me But I know what you're going through Just call me and I've be there Coz,I still love you.

Bethy 4-Aug-05/2:47 PM
Is this a dream-state, a lonesome trick of the mind, sounds like the separation of two loves searching for a reason to be togeather...
good poem...Bethy :)




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