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Vain Moment

Member since 2005 · Posted 3 Aug 2005 · 6 comments

Walking past a mirror I saw my face this could not be me!!! everything is not in place...ha! I looked like a morning Picaso with my hair all messed I picked up a brush and tried to do my best...heheha! I patted here and... smoothed that flaming red hair hmmm maybe I should wear a hat! to be seen out there...hoheha! Nah! that would not be me! So, I pulled it back... Sprayed a little spray... and...ah! that was that!! perrrfect...

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[7] T. Jonathron Remp 3-Aug-05/1:31 PM Reply
morning Picaso++
[n/a] Bethy › T. Jonathron Remp 3-Aug-05/3:07 PM Reply
mornin Mr.T hehehaha!
[7] PoeticOne 3-Aug-05/1:52 PM Reply
I like the style you put into it, it seemed you enjoyed this one! Good job!
[n/a] Bethy › PoeticOne 3-Aug-05/3:09 PM Reply
Yes I did enjoy this one, I wrote it in about 5 minutes...I woke one morning sitting upside down I believe...hehaha! Thank you
[7] | Broken | 5-Aug-05/8:19 AM Reply
Hahaha ... This is fun!! (",*)
Cheers for Picaso !
[n/a] Bethy › | Broken | 5-Aug-05/12:06 PM Reply
Thank you Broken...Cheers!!! Bethy:)