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Vain Moment (Free verse) by Bethy
Walking past a mirror
I saw my face
this could not be me!!!
everything is not in place...ha!
I looked like a morning Picaso
with my hair all messed
I picked up a brush
and tried to do my best...heheha!
I patted here and...
smoothed that flaming red hair
hmmm maybe I should wear a hat!
to be seen out there...hoheha!
Nah! that would not be me!
So, I pulled it back...
Sprayed a little spray...
and...ah! that was that!!
perrrfect...
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6291
Posted: August 3, 2005 11:29 AM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2005 11:29 AM PDT
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