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Vain Moment (Free verse) by Bethy
Walking past a mirror I saw my face this could not be me!!! everything is not in place...ha! I looked like a morning Picaso with my hair all messed I picked up a brush and tried to do my best...heheha! I patted here and... smoothed that flaming red hair hmmm maybe I should wear a hat! to be seen out there...hoheha! Nah! that would not be me! So, I pulled it back... Sprayed a little spray... and...ah! that was that!! perrrfect...

Up the ladder: Haven
Down the ladder: Prayer

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6291
Posted: August 3, 2005 11:29 AM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2005 11:29 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185 | 3-Aug-05/1:31 PM | Reply
morning Picaso++
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.155 > T. Jonathron Remp | 3-Aug-05/3:07 PM | Reply
mornin Mr.T hehehaha!
[7] PoeticOne @ 24.43.122.90 | 3-Aug-05/1:52 PM | Reply
I like the style you put into it, it seemed you enjoyed this one! Good job!
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.155 > PoeticOne | 3-Aug-05/3:09 PM | Reply
Yes I did enjoy this one, I wrote it in about 5 minutes...I woke one morning sitting upside down I believe...hehaha! Thank you
[7] | Broken | @ 202.156.2.82 | 5-Aug-05/8:19 AM | Reply
Hahaha ... This is fun!! (",*)
Cheers for Picaso !
[n/a] Bethy @ 24.222.32.211 > | Broken | | 5-Aug-05/12:06 PM | Reply
Thank you Broken...Cheers!!! Bethy:)
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