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Vain Moment (Free verse) by Bethy

Walking past a mirror I saw my face this could not be me!!! everything is not in place...ha! I looked like a morning Picaso with my hair all messed I picked up a brush and tried to do my best...heheha! I patted here and... smoothed that flaming red hair hmmm maybe I should wear a hat! to be seen out there...hoheha! Nah! that would not be me! So, I pulled it back... Sprayed a little spray... and...ah! that was that!! perrrfect...

PoeticOne 3-Aug-05/1:52 PM
I like the style you put into it, it seemed you enjoyed this one! Good job!




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