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The Edge is Better Blue (Cinquain) by D. $ Fontera Writing
Of sanity
When one has seen its edge
Never conveys the vertigo
One feels
Up the ladder:
mary
Down the ladder:
how did i forget that i have to go to work?
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Posted: August 4, 2005 3:36 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2005 3:36 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7333 Comments:
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Bethy @ 24.222.32.251
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5-Aug-05/6:50 AM
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there is a fine line between love and hate...hmmm...life is a prism of color...ironically the edges of a prism are all blue...this is what I saw in your Cinquain...good job... Bethy :)
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