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The Edge is Better Blue (Cinquain) by D. $ Fontera
Writing Of sanity When one has seen its edge Never conveys the vertigo One feels

Up the ladder: mary
Down the ladder: Castle of Pandas IV

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7285
Posted: August 4, 2005 3:36 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2005 3:36 PM PDT
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[8] Bethy @ 24.222.32.251 | 5-Aug-05/6:50 AM | Reply
there is a fine line between love and hate...hmmm...life is a prism of color...ironically the edges of a prism are all blue...this is what I saw in your Cinquain...good job... Bethy :)
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