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Free verse № 94606

The End of the Beginning

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Mar 2004 · 1 comment

Staring out my window, Nothing moves in the dream only I can see. There isn't really a warm breeze with the scent of fresh peaches. There isn't really that sunset which is stretched over the horizon displying each color as it's trophy. The texture of dew-covered grass tickles my toes and I giggle. Then loud bells soar through my brain. WARNING comes to mind. But alas, just my alarm clock, reminding me Life is good.

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[5] zodiac 21-Mar-04/6:53 AM Reply
The best part is the 'surprise' at the end, when you realise it's not real, it's just a dream.