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The End of the Beginning (Free verse) by DarkThirteens
Staring out my window,
Nothing moves
in the dream
only I can see.
There isn't really
a warm breeze
with the scent
of fresh peaches.
There isn't really
that sunset
which is stretched
over the horizon
displying each color
as it's trophy.
The texture
of dew-covered grass
tickles my toes
and I giggle.
Then loud bells
soar through my brain.
WARNING
comes to mind.
But alas, just my alarm clock,
reminding me
Life is good.
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Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7301
Posted: March 20, 2004 8:58 PM PST; Last modified: March 20, 2004 8:58 PM PST
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