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In My Words (Free verse) by RGSsparky
Once upon a time, I tried to Rhyme, It began with hello, Then died on its arse and burst into flames on the Canada airport runway, Nope my mistake that was a plane, But yea, Oh yea, Whoooptydooo Basil, Who even likes Brazil, M'eh, So there!

Up the ladder: First Love
Down the ladder: you

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2058
Posted: August 3, 2005 5:23 PM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2005 5:23 PM PDT
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[n/a] RGSsparky @ 81.135.219.214 | 3-Aug-05/5:23 PM | Reply
Oh yes, a new creation after so much time!
[8] pennymarie @ 4.246.15.235 | 3-Aug-05/11:36 PM | Reply
cool... just spit those words out and smash them against a rock and see what ya get .. cute very cute

Penny
[7] Bethy @ 24.222.32.251 | 5-Aug-05/7:11 AM | Reply
YEAH! Bethy:)
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