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untitled lyric (Lyric) by jsd
and i don’t know what i was thinking when i said i’d take this the little you could give crafted you as the ultimate bliss and i stretched my masochism to the limit but this is too much to forgive some days my urge to wreck you is insatiable others i’m quite content to just forget you so i guess this is how you learn to stop living from survival to survival and i said baby, baby: i'm taking back all the songs, and i said baby, baby: i'm right where i belong there are no photographs only memories to repeat give them adequate time and they’re just bound to deplete when i feel everybody peering in i try to shake them off like rain but as far as you and all you hold within i’ve given up on your pain and i said baby, baby: i'm taking back all the songs, and i said baby, baby: i'm right where i belong

Up the ladder: Lent Begins
Down the ladder: First Kiss

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2052
Posted: April 8, 2004 8:58 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2004 8:58 PM PDT
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[9] caitydee @ 205.188.116.68 | 10-May-04/5:32 PM | Reply
theres some really good stuff here, i think you were able to express your thoughts well, it was a nice read, well done
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