on Harp Song of the Prawne Men by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
25 Feb 2006, 3:51 PM
Ya know, I ask myself that question every day.
on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone
26 Feb 2006, 5:57 AM
on An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta
26 Feb 2006, 6:15 AM
This is a great idea. Some of the stuff is a little corny and you're likely to receive many a parody from the jokesters on this site se be ready. I found some of this very amusing in a positive way, especially the ending. Lose "lover of god", it sounds sexual no matter how you put it.
on Filler by MacFrantic
26 Feb 2006, 5:37 PM
Neat idea.
on Simon's Legacy (draft) by Caducus
28 Feb 2006, 8:05 AM
I'd like to see a word after "mother" in L1 S2 to reflect the "womb sonic" line.
To say my brother became my father might be a little less confusing in S3. I'm not sure how he managed hang himself from his firetruck.
Some hardcore stuff here though.
To say my brother became my father might be a little less confusing in S3. I'm not sure how he managed hang himself from his firetruck.
Some hardcore stuff here though.
on some deleted poem
27 Feb 2006, 3:53 PM
Sounds like various scenes from The Passion of The Christ minus all the gross stuff.
on Today's Spam by nentwined
27 Feb 2006, 2:59 PM
on Depression by terbenaw
28 Feb 2006, 1:39 AM
Despise is neither a noun nor is it an adjective, except maybe in this sentence. Impressive stuff considering it's basically a long sustained whine.
on =, <>, & . . . by Dovina
2 Mar 2006, 8:31 AM
3===>---<splat!
on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger
1 Mar 2006, 4:23 PM
What's a "rosehip mist"? I looked it up and this is what I got:
http://www.nzpacific.com/details.php?id=
I dont think "prism" is the right word. A prism is the object that devides the light, not the rainbow of color. You could try maybe Prismacolor which is a brand name but it basically means a rainbow of color. You could also say kaleidoscope or polychrome.
The rest is really good.
http://www.nzpacific.com/details.php?id=
I dont think "prism" is the right word. A prism is the object that devides the light, not the rainbow of color. You could try maybe Prismacolor which is a brand name but it basically means a rainbow of color. You could also say kaleidoscope or polychrome.
The rest is really good.
on some deleted poem
2 Mar 2006, 7:52 AM
It flows more like a wagon train then anything else. Some neat lines although I hardly think this is a train of thought poem so you've kinda gypped us.
on =, <>, & . . . by Dovina
2 Mar 2006, 8:05 AM
Titties.
on Lick up your ears by Dental Panic
4 Mar 2006, 9:37 AM
Surely you've heard the saying "prick up your ears" which is meant to be misheard as "prick up your rears"?
on tomorrow is another day by hendrimike
4 Mar 2006, 9:30 AM
"Frankly _ I don't give a damn."
on Breakfast by Dhanesh M Kumar
8 Mar 2006, 8:49 AM
Show, don't tell. Don't preach. Nobody needs to be told America is evil. We already know we are. We admire the level of evil Iraq has reached. We can only dream of the days when we can cut clits off women and heads off peace corp workers. Do you really think all this bitching is going to sway Americans? More importantly, do you hate black people? I noticed you only mentioned the name of negros. Really the more I read this the more I realize you're terrifically racist.