Re: Harp Song of the Prawne Men by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	25-Feb-06/3:51 PM
Ya know, I ask myself that question every day.
Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone	26-Feb-06/5:57 AM
My gift to all of you. http://livedigital.com/APtVJAA9tw/content/22014/p4
Re: An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta	26-Feb-06/6:15 AM
This is a great idea. Some of the stuff is a little corny and you're likely to receive many a parody from the jokesters on this site se be ready. I found some of this very amusing in a positive way, especially the ending. Lose "lover of god", it sounds sexual no matter how you put it.
Re: Filler by MacFrantic	26-Feb-06/5:37 PM
Neat idea.
Re: Today's Spam by nentwined	27-Feb-06/2:59 PM
Reminds me of this skit:) http://www.yourdailymedia.com/media/1129383135
Re: part by Adriaan	27-Feb-06/3:49 PM
Drop acid lately?
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Feb-06/3:53 PM
Sounds like various scenes from The Passion of The Christ minus all the gross stuff.
Re: There by Dovina	28-Feb-06/1:19 AM
Been there, done that.
Re: Depression by terbenaw	28-Feb-06/1:39 AM
Despise is neither a noun nor is it an adjective, except maybe in this sentence. Impressive stuff considering it's basically a long sustained whine.
Re: Simon's Legacy (draft) by Caducus	28-Feb-06/8:05 AM
I'd like to see a word after "mother" in L1 S2 to reflect the "womb sonic" line. To say my brother became my father might be a little less confusing in S3. I'm not sure how he managed hang himself from his firetruck. Some hardcore stuff here though.
Re: There by Dovina	1-Mar-06/12:04 PM
I'd give you some words of inspiration like the others did but right now I've got to go curl up into a fetal position and weep quietly into my pillow.
Re: A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	1-Mar-06/4:23 PM
What's a "rosehip mist"? I looked it up and this is what I got: http://www.nzpacific.com/details.php?id=185&which=product I dont think "prism" is the right word. A prism is the object that devides the light, not the rainbow of color. You could try maybe Prismacolor which is a brand name but it basically means a rainbow of color. You could also say kaleidoscope or polychrome. The rest is really good.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Mar-06/7:52 AM
It flows more like a wagon train then anything else. Some neat lines although I hardly think this is a train of thought poem so you've kinda gypped us.
Re: =, <>, & . . . by Dovina	2-Mar-06/8:05 AM
Titties.
Re: =, <>, & . . . by Dovina	2-Mar-06/8:31 AM
3===>---<splat!
Re: tomorrow is another day by hendrimike	4-Mar-06/9:30 AM
"Frankly _ I don't give a damn."
Re: Lick up your ears by Dental Panic	4-Mar-06/9:37 AM
Surely you've heard the saying "prick up your ears" which is meant to be misheard as "prick up your rears"?
Re: The Ocean by Fayt	6-Mar-06/9:19 AM
Unless the ocean's name is "Sweet" I suggest losing the possesive form. While your at it change "Sweet" to something else. The ocean's not sweet it's salty. What's with all the caps in the first line.
Re: Piano by Dovina	6-Mar-06/1:48 PM
You need a more satisfying ending. The rest of it I really liked.
Re: Breakfast by Dhanesh M Kumar	8-Mar-06/8:49 AM
Show, don't tell. Don't preach. Nobody needs to be told America is evil. We already know we are. We admire the level of evil Iraq has reached. We can only dream of the days when we can cut clits off women and heads off peace corp workers. Do you really think all this bitching is going to sway Americans? More importantly, do you hate black people? I noticed you only mentioned the name of negros. Really the more I read this the more I realize you're terrifically racist.