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part (Senryu) by Adriaan
Raindrop, tear; Acid drop, bitter sweet: leaving you
Up the ladder: Frozen Branches
Down the ladder: Mouth full of Posion
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7828
Posted: February 27, 2006 7:08 AM PST; Last modified: February 27, 2006 7:08 AM PST
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[8] ALChemy @ 24.74.100.11 | 27-Feb-06/3:49 PM | Reply
Drop acid lately?
[6] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 27-Feb-06/4:43 PM | Reply
Raindrop is to tear, as acid is to salt.
[n/a] Adriaan @ 198.54.202.18 | 2-Mar-06/5:12 AM | Reply
Acid drops are an old-fashioned kind of candy.
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