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tomorrow is another day (Free verse) by hendrimike
tomorrow is another day, atleast that is what they say. but, tomorrow will never come, for tomorrow is always today. will we ever live in the present? because now is always right then. i hope the future can give me more than the present ever can. my life is so misleading, and more confusing as days go by. i have come to hate tomorrow, because tomorrow is a lie.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5679
Posted: November 5, 2004 1:22 PM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2006 1:29 AM PST
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[10] zodiac @ 212.118.11.11 | 6-Nov-04/5:19 AM | Reply
If you don't own a blacklight and at least one blacklight poster, I will eat my shmaagh.
[10] edpeterson @ 68.79.60.123 | 6-Nov-04/9:09 AM | Reply
dude, i wish these went to 11!
[n/a] hendrimike @ 64.12.117.5 > edpeterson | 7-Nov-04/11:18 AM | Reply
thanks, man. i wrote that when i was sixteen and it has stuck in my head ever since...
[10] ALChemy @ 24.74.100.11 | 4-Mar-06/9:30 AM | Reply
"Frankly _ I don't give a damn."
[9] xXxDemonicAngelxXx @ 205.188.117.10 | 5-Mar-06/8:52 AM | Reply
It was really good. Nice job.
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