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Depression (Other) by terbenaw
Equated with darkness, happiness disguised
Disfigured, like its makers, Deceit and Lies
A cause for many to cry to the skies
While Disgust follows, from sleep and through rise
A day filled with fear, anger and despise
And a night that ends with internal cries
A life with purpose, yet without meaning
Left with nothing, left hoping and dreaming
Trust is dead, everyone is out scheming
Societies vultures, ready for feeding
Human interaction leaves you cut and bleeding
Crying in fear as you run from your inner demons
Many will join, though few will win
The struggle to see true light again
Stuck in a murky tunnel with twists & sharp bends
It seems like progress, but you're stuck in a spin
A whirlpool of fallacy, a spiral of sin
A road leading nowhere, the beginning's the end
You cry for help - silence is your answer
Slow degradation; your soul has cancer
Profanity streams out like barroom banter
In melodic mayhem like drunken chanters
Your mind slows down from a run to a canter
And the world begins to lose its glamour
Alone in your room, you sit and you think
You're told you're blessed; to you life stinks
One step closer; right there at the brink
Rage all consuming; your vision turns pink
Day in, day out, your life is now your drink
A promised life lost in the time of a blink
Looking for friends when there's no one to call
In the midst of mental midgets, you still feel small
A time-locked consciousness slowed to a crawl
Your world has ended; you've "hit the wall"
Who is available whenever you fall?
A plethora of voices - your only friends after all
You travel the world and its seven seas
Journey the galaxy at uncharted speeds
You have friends who are easy to please
Imagination - the only friends you need
Antisocial thoughts keep your fears at ease
Lost in thought, oblivious, as the world bleeds
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6416
Posted: March 19, 2004 12:39 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2006 7:55 PM PST
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