Re: A Buncha Dungeons and Dragons Haiku by razorgrin |
13-Mar-03/8:07 PM |
First I must deal with your talking about nothing else when I see you, then I must deal with it in your poetry... Bah. See if I ever make you a CD again. I give you points because it's funny, remove some points because I'm sick of the subject, add some because it's amusing to see your conversation put in poetry, and remove some because I've heard it all before. Love 'n' kisses. Really.
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Re: Ten new questions from Dan Rather by horus8 |
28-Feb-03/6:55 AM |
Number one: you forgot 'deliberately mispronounce' his name as well.
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Re: balthazar by UnityMitford |
28-Feb-03/6:54 AM |
This is much much better if you mean 'burning bridges' literally.
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Re: a comment on Sleepy Geek by razorgrin |
27-Feb-03/8:00 AM |
Probably, yes. If not, I'll just bludgeon.
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Re: Gargamel & Azriel by Bachus |
26-Feb-03/1:32 PM |
Azrael, Azrael, AzraEl, AZRAEL!!! Why is there not one English person on fifty who can remember the damn cat's name, and not one that seems to be able to spell it???
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Re: a comment on Earthly Delights? by razorgrin |
26-Feb-03/7:50 AM |
You know, dear creature, it's not good form to admit to giving out zeroes out of jealousy and hurt feelings.
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Re: a comment on Sleepy Geek by razorgrin |
26-Feb-03/7:37 AM |
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Re: a comment on Greek Tragedy#1 by Mr Pig |
25-Feb-03/5:37 PM |
Umm... that was eleven... twelve if you count the sentence previous...
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Re: Sleepy Geek by razorgrin |
25-Feb-03/10:02 AM |
Hee hee... I remember that evening. Sorry I couldn't do anything about it for you.
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Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
19-Feb-03/10:32 AM |
The last one is excellent, but the other two don't seem as great, m'dear. Possibly because they don't really let people figure out what they're about as well as the others do.
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Re: Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin |
19-Feb-03/10:28 AM |
Sweetheart, sweetheart, sweetheart. Th'art a very sick child. One of the better crops, indeed.
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Re: The Long Walk Back by Jigg |
11-Feb-03/6:14 PM |
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Tee hee hee hee hee. Giggle giggle. I'm sorry, I haven't stopped giggling since I first read this. This is one of the funniest pieces I've ever read here. Please, please, PLEASE tell me this is one of your non-serious ones.
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Re: Perversions 4: Kink in Space by razorgrin |
10-Feb-03/1:45 PM |
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Re: a comment on Three Daughters by <~> |
7-Feb-03/8:53 PM |
Oops... sorry about that, I didn't see this during the past week. I'd love to, but not right now, as I'm too tired to do it honour. Tomorrow or the next day, or something like that. Just one comment I will toss into the ring right now, though: Why does the tense change halfway through? Just wondering.
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Re: a comment on Love Under Will by Tyriana |
5-Feb-03/6:08 PM |
But now it seems too short. Something's missing. I think the third stanza was needed, just in need of work.
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Re: Love Under Will by Tyriana |
5-Feb-03/1:26 PM |
Brava... that's rather magnificent. The third stanza seems a bit weak, howe'er.
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Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin |
2-Feb-03/6:01 PM |
Dammit, that title. Argh. That would make such a wonderful stretto. And I can't use it because I'd be stealing it. Erg.
Oh, and tell Limonade I'm sorry about the hamster. Really I am.
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Re: Three Daughters by <~> |
1-Feb-03/9:00 PM |
That's really quite gorgeous. Or maybe it's jsut that I'm a sucker for that sort of story. Saying that something isn't a poem because it's a story is ridiculous -- among other things, it means that the Divine Comedy isn't poetry. And you use archaic words, which is also good. Full cheers, dammit.
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Re: Secret, Admirer by <~> |
1-Feb-03/8:57 PM |
'pizzicato slurs...' Damnright brilliant. Slurred pizzicati... DAMN but that's a great image.
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Re: drum circle by <~> |
1-Feb-03/8:48 PM |
Hmmm. I never thought I'd end up using this comment on someone, but it seems to be trying too hard. Lovely, though.
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