Re: A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere	26-Dec-04/9:01 AM
Beautiful!!!
Re: Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos	24-Dec-04/9:05 AM
A Sestina, wow!! That's real tough!! I did one today but damn, this is million times better!! Do check me out if you could!! 10!!
Re: Possibilities by Nicholas Jones	24-Dec-04/9:02 AM
Class in glass!!! 10!!!!
Re: a comment on Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	23-Dec-04/9:17 AM
Neither am I a gayu nor an Islam. I am a HINDU and a heterosexual. (I thought the latter was pretty evident in my poems.)
Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	23-Dec-04/4:24 AM
Happy Holidays to you, my good sir!!
Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	23-Dec-04/12:13 AM
Why don't you just drop the arrogance?? People have the right to comment what they think?? I didn't say your poem SUCKS. I liked it just fine, but I though it could have been improved. Anything wrong witrh improvements??? Isn't this what the comment box is for.. To leave your honest views?? I am not here to please your vanity or prick it either. I just told you what I honestly thought to be true. And besides, I have read much classier villanelles. I'd never accept it if you say PERHAPS and DRIPS are perfect rhymes. Come and tear my work apart. I'd appreciate it. But please stop taking out your spite on me. I am here to improve my poetry,not to share kick ass poems.
Re: there's no way out by oneglove	22-Dec-04/11:57 PM
Not bad!! But what does AGAINS mean??
Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	22-Dec-04/3:24 AM
So did you visit my poems to analyse it and give a honest comment or just take out your spite coz' I said your poem isn't classy?? Do read my profile, I never claimed to write well. I know my poetry sucks. Besides, English is NOT my language and I am just 17. I just told you what I felt about your poem, I didn't take out any personal grudges. I am open to criticism but it should be done in a positive way, not insulted.
Re: the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL?	21-Dec-04/11:43 PM
that makes you go insain... It's spelled INSANE. either way im bringin you pain...Spelled BRINGING and its all for my ...Spelled IT'S or IT IS. Below average...a 3!!
Re: Interstellar Hell by PsydewaysTears	21-Dec-04/11:29 PM
Nice work. Above the "Average".
Re: Joanna by DR Limerick	21-Dec-04/11:26 PM
This is ot a limerick. A limerick consists of 5 lines and has the rhyme scheme of aabba. Joanna and Spanners don't rhyme and this has only 3 lines. Not funny either. A 1.
Re: Remembrance by dragonfly	21-Dec-04/11:18 PM
I feel nostalgic too in a queer way!!! Nice work
Re: keep on digging by nentwined	21-Dec-04/11:11 PM
The first 2 lines rhyme while the later 3 donot. Don't you think the initial rhyme was unnecessary??
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	21-Dec-04/11:06 PM
A very immatured piece and nothing poetic whatsoever.
Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8	21-Dec-04/11:03 PM
The rhyme seems forced. You could have just written that in a free verse and expressed yourself better. Good effort since it's a Villanelle (They are hard, I admit) but not exactly classy!!
Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	21-Dec-04/10:57 PM
I found the "THOU" thing pretty unnecessary as you really don't follow it up in the other cases. I won't say I hate but don't love it either. A 5!!
Re: One-Man Act by Blindpoetry	21-Dec-04/10:53 PM
Nah, I don't really like it. Doesn't flow too well and not too poetic either. A 4 for your efforts though.
Re: Recognition by nentwined	21-Dec-04/10:46 PM
trust**
Re: The Drop by auscot	21-Dec-04/10:45 PM
What more do you need than commendation?? Not very hilarious bu a decent read.
Re: Recognition by nentwined	21-Dec-04/10:44 PM
I can't get you. Either I am intellectually challenged or this is crap. I rust your abilities, so I settle for the former conclusion. Do check me out. A 5 as a benefit of doubt!!