| Re: A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere |
21-Dec-04/10:31 PM |
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Okay, a bit cheesy but nice work!! Just the rhyme needs a little more work. You start with abcb and end up with aaaa. Anyways, hanks for reading mine. I've posted a new one too. Look at it if you have the chance.
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| Re: DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Dec-04/8:14 AM |
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| Re: DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
21-Dec-04/8:13 AM |
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Nice!! Haikius could be challenging. Well pulled off!!
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
21-Dec-04/7:57 AM |
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Love the weave of words. Check me out if you could!!
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| Re: Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT |
21-Dec-04/7:56 AM |
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Wow!! That's indeed one of the most unique poems I've read in any of the poetry sites. Not flawless definitely, but better than most stuff.
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| Re: Into My World by sliver |
21-Dec-04/7:45 AM |
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I meant to put "Dedication TO your love...". A typo!!
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| Re: Into My World by sliver |
21-Dec-04/7:43 AM |
Renee Blue Eyes!! Dedication your love surely!!
Flowed pretty well towards the end but there was something wrong with the flow initially. Honestly, the 2nd line needs work.
Good work though, I love acrostics. I have many of my own. Hopefully I'd post them soon.
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