replying on My Wife by Dovina
30 Dec 2004, 9:18 AM
I am NOT a young woman. Rather, I am a young MAN!!
on Internet Inspiration (Dovina) revised by jroday
30 Dec 2004, 9:18 AM
Very nice poem!! Why don't you put it under ODE???
on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
30 Dec 2004, 9:17 AM
BUTLERS**** You are referring to many butlers not just one. Hence no apostrophes!!
replying on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya
30 Dec 2004, 9:04 AM
Ironically I wrote this earlier than the ones I posted before. Perhaps I am deteriorating!!
on Distance by Lifeboatman
29 Dec 2004, 7:00 PM
Awesome!!!
replying on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya
28 Dec 2004, 10:48 PM
Thanks a lot!!
on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry
28 Dec 2004, 10:41 PM
There you are!!
Personally I don't bother much about votes. I appreciate comments more because it helps me know what exactly one thinks of my poem and it helps me improve.
A 9 from me.
Personally I don't bother much about votes. I appreciate comments more because it helps me know what exactly one thinks of my poem and it helps me improve.
A 9 from me.
replying on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry
28 Dec 2004, 10:37 PM
DO I THEN DESERVE A COMMENT?
on A Short Letter by Ranger
28 Dec 2004, 10:36 PM
Pretty nice!!
on two flies by suckmychucks
28 Dec 2004, 10:35 PM
That is NOT a limerick.
Limerick is supposed to be of 5 lines and follow therhyme scheme of aabba
Limerick is supposed to be of 5 lines and follow therhyme scheme of aabba
replying on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry
28 Dec 2004, 10:31 PM
But it's important to poetry. They mean different things.
Spelling PHASE as FASE is acceptable and infact quite fine. That much of liberation is fine but YOUR and YOU ARE means two different things and can never be used as substitutes.
Could you please read my latest poem too? It's another acrostic.
Spelling PHASE as FASE is acceptable and infact quite fine. That much of liberation is fine but YOUR and YOU ARE means two different things and can never be used as substitutes.
Could you please read my latest poem too? It's another acrostic.
on Storms by Jeremi B. Handrinos
28 Dec 2004, 10:21 PM
Very beautiful!!!!
on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry
28 Dec 2004, 10:20 PM
"Your going to jump my men"
Ain't it supposed to be YOU ARE??
Ain't it supposed to be YOU ARE??
replying on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya
28 Dec 2004, 9:34 AM
Yeah, i've read lots and lots of poems but not too many sestinas. While writing this all I did refer to was Elizabeth Bishop's Sestina.
And the rules stated that it's better if the 6 words could be used in different forms but it's not complusory.
And the rules stated that it's better if the 6 words could be used in different forms but it's not complusory.
replying on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya
28 Dec 2004, 4:10 AM
No buddy, i am not gonna argue. Ofcourse this is my first attempt and I did whatever little justice i could. I have used words like BLOCK and BLANK differently. But how do I use FINGERS in a different form?? (Surely FINGERING wouldn't be too decent lol).
Just tell me what exactly I must do and I will look up for it. I am here to learn and suggestions are welcome. Please do check my latest poem too.
Happy New Year!!
Just tell me what exactly I must do and I will look up for it. I am here to learn and suggestions are welcome. Please do check my latest poem too.
Happy New Year!!
replying on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya
28 Dec 2004, 12:24 AM
Nope!! You could talk for I appreciate nothing more than honest comments!!
Thanks a lot!!
Thanks a lot!!
replying on Spotty Sun by Blindpoetry
27 Dec 2004, 9:43 PM
Blah Blah really helps. Now I understand the poem better. *Wish I could vote again*.
Happy New Year.
Please check me out too.
Happy New Year.
Please check me out too.
on Spotty Sun by Blindpoetry
27 Dec 2004, 9:16 PM
I don't really follow it well. The weaving of words, though not overly complicated, seems a bit confusing.
Can't say I like it, neither do I hate it.
Can't say I like it, neither do I hate it.
replying on Acrostic Terza Rima by Bhaskaryya
27 Dec 2004, 9:12 PM
Thanks hun!!