| Re: a comment on My Wife by Dovina |
30-Dec-04/9:18 AM |
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I am NOT a young woman. Rather, I am a young MAN!!
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| Re: Internet Inspiration (Dovina) revised by jroday |
30-Dec-04/9:18 AM |
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Very nice poem!! Why don't you put it under ODE???
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| Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
30-Dec-04/9:17 AM |
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BUTLERS**** You are referring to many butlers not just one. Hence no apostrophes!!
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| Re: a comment on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya |
30-Dec-04/9:04 AM |
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Ironically I wrote this earlier than the ones I posted before. Perhaps I am deteriorating!!
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| Re: Distance by Lifeboatman |
29-Dec-04/7:00 PM |
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| Re: My Wife by Dovina |
29-Dec-04/6:56 PM |
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HaHa!!! Great poem!! Very much like a breathe of fresh air on the site.
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| Re: a comment on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya |
28-Dec-04/10:48 PM |
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| Re: Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:41 PM |
There you are!!
Personally I don't bother much about votes. I appreciate comments more because it helps me know what exactly one thinks of my poem and it helps me improve.
A 9 from me.
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| Re: a comment on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:37 PM |
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DO I THEN DESERVE A COMMENT?
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| Re: A Short Letter by Ranger |
28-Dec-04/10:36 PM |
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| Re: two flies by suckmychucks |
28-Dec-04/10:35 PM |
That is NOT a limerick.
Limerick is supposed to be of 5 lines and follow therhyme scheme of aabba
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| Re: a comment on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:31 PM |
But it's important to poetry. They mean different things.
Spelling PHASE as FASE is acceptable and infact quite fine. That much of liberation is fine but YOUR and YOU ARE means two different things and can never be used as substitutes.
Could you please read my latest poem too? It's another acrostic.
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| Re: Storms by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
28-Dec-04/10:21 PM |
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| Re: Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:20 PM |
"Your going to jump my men"
Ain't it supposed to be YOU ARE??
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| Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya |
28-Dec-04/9:34 AM |
Yeah, i've read lots and lots of poems but not too many sestinas. While writing this all I did refer to was Elizabeth Bishop's Sestina.
And the rules stated that it's better if the 6 words could be used in different forms but it's not complusory.
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| Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya |
28-Dec-04/4:10 AM |
No buddy, i am not gonna argue. Ofcourse this is my first attempt and I did whatever little justice i could. I have used words like BLOCK and BLANK differently. But how do I use FINGERS in a different form?? (Surely FINGERING wouldn't be too decent lol).
Just tell me what exactly I must do and I will look up for it. I am here to learn and suggestions are welcome. Please do check my latest poem too.
Happy New Year!!
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| Re: a comment on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya |
28-Dec-04/12:24 AM |
Nope!! You could talk for I appreciate nothing more than honest comments!!
Thanks a lot!!
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| Re: a comment on Spotty Sun by Blindpoetry |
27-Dec-04/9:43 PM |
Blah Blah really helps. Now I understand the poem better. *Wish I could vote again*.
Happy New Year.
Please check me out too.
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| Re: Spotty Sun by Blindpoetry |
27-Dec-04/9:16 PM |
I don't really follow it well. The weaving of words, though not overly complicated, seems a bit confusing.
Can't say I like it, neither do I hate it.
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| Re: a comment on Acrostic Terza Rima by Bhaskaryya |
27-Dec-04/9:12 PM |
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