Re: Forest Rain by bamf909	25-Feb-05/10:15 PM
Simply beautiful. Haikus speak volumes in mere 17 syllables.. This is a stupendous example with beautiful imagery. Great work!
Re: The Voice by jroday	25-Feb-05/9:54 PM
Has a lyrical rhythm to it and I wonder if this would do better as lyrics rather than free verse poem, due to some inconsistency in line breaks and rhyme schemes. It was an enjoyable read nonetheless and the matter was great. Verdict: Beautiful!
Re: a comment on To You, My Son by Bhaskaryya	24-Jan-05/6:55 AM
I am 18 and 10 years away from a real son!! It was just a cynical piece directed at the society. Inspiration drawn from Gabriel Okara and W.H Auden.
Re: To You, My Son by Bhaskaryya	23-Jan-05/1:54 AM
Trying to be cynical lol
Re: paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined	23-Jan-05/1:50 AM
Classy!! Beautiful work!
Re: a comment on Tale of a lonely heart by Bhaskaryya	23-Jan-05/1:45 AM
I've no idea 'bout Schmalzy weltschmerz but could you please actually comment on my poem?
Re: Moon and History by kawakurdi	12-Jan-05/7:09 AM
Awesome!!!
Re: medieval myth by ThePariahDog	12-Jan-05/7:05 AM
Nice :)
Re: a comment on The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya	9-Jan-05/2:02 AM
What does that mean in context to the poem??
Re: a comment on The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya	8-Jan-05/9:11 AM
Yes, i indeed have sacrificed.....But it's just a format I wanted to try...I'm still in my experimenting age!!
Re: The Day The World Blew Away by OfaRevolutionAJD	8-Jan-05/8:54 AM
That is NOT a glosa
Re: AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul	8-Jan-05/8:52 AM
Anticipation**
Re: AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul	8-Jan-05/8:46 AM
Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...
Re: Fanboy by Blindpoetry	7-Jan-05/8:34 PM
Nice :)
Re: Math Poem 3 by Dovina	6-Jan-05/2:41 AM
I hate maths but that is a cool poem all the same!! Presently we are doing integration and diferential equations in school and I go to sleep everytime the teacher enters!! A 9!
Re: a comment on Both Sided Acrostic by Bhaskaryya	5-Jan-05/7:38 PM
That was an excellent poem!1 I hope to reach that level someday..I am just a beginner. Here is a parallel acrostic by my friend... Treasuring the past I tired to stay in a distant desert, buT He came and erased the tenebrous days from my memoiR Only a few moments’ feelings made us, “us” from him and I Marked with uncertainty our love stayed, hushed and virgiN. Anticipating the recondite dream to bloom as a new epiC, Smilingly, with open arms, always love waited on our waY Loving a person with out seeing is not a simple committaL Optimistically he waited till I revealed that I love him toO Virtue of prayers must have forced us to divulge our luV Else, how these feelings didn’t get erased in the cruise of lifE Serendipity is what that kept this relation together, alwayS Time or space couldn’t wreck a love carved deep in hearT Revolving on the orbits of life, to see an eclipse I did wisH I could feel emotions growing like a crescent to a full halO Neglecting all the hurdles of life, love was declared for hiM Capitulating in his arms, my spirit found complete euphoriA Yearning to meet this eternal love I wait across seven seaS Trincy loves thomas and thomas loves Trincy
Re: What I Do Know by PsydewaysTears	5-Jan-05/9:56 AM
Nice!!
Re: a comment on Both Sided Acrostic by Bhaskaryya	5-Jan-05/9:42 AM
I know it's AN ordeal. But there was no way I could edit it, so I was hoping you guyz would overlook it!! (Damn you!!) By YARN, I mean to cover. (Yarns my soul...Covers or knits my soul...) That part makes sense though! Thanks anyway!!
Re: Sitting in a damp refrigerator box, wondering (ODE) Basque by zodiac	3-Jan-05/5:55 AM
How is that a Glosa?? Besides, I submitted one!!
Re: An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya	31-Dec-04/8:38 PM
I wrote that waaaay back!! So please comment accordingly. I know it's not good!!