replying on To You, My Son by Bhaskaryya
24 Jan 2005, 6:55 AM
I am 18 and 10 years away from a real son!! It was just a cynical piece directed at the society. Inspiration drawn from Gabriel Okara and W.H Auden.
on To You, My Son by Bhaskaryya
23 Jan 2005, 1:54 AM
Trying to be cynical lol
on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined
23 Jan 2005, 1:50 AM
Classy!! Beautiful work!
replying on Tale of a lonely heart by Bhaskaryya
23 Jan 2005, 1:45 AM
I've no idea 'bout Schmalzy weltschmerz but could you please actually comment on my poem?
on Moon and History by kawakurdi
12 Jan 2005, 7:09 AM
Awesome!!!
on medieval myth by ThePariahDog
12 Jan 2005, 7:05 AM
Nice :)
replying on The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya
9 Jan 2005, 2:02 AM
What does that mean in context to the poem??
replying on The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya
8 Jan 2005, 9:11 AM
Yes, i indeed have sacrificed.....But it's just a format I wanted to try...I'm still in my experimenting age!!
on The Day The World Blew Away by OfaRevolutionAJD
8 Jan 2005, 8:54 AM
That is NOT a glosa
on AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul
8 Jan 2005, 8:52 AM
Anticipation**
on AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul
8 Jan 2005, 8:46 AM
Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...
on Fanboy by Blindpoetry
7 Jan 2005, 8:34 PM
Nice :)
on Math Poem 3 by Dovina
6 Jan 2005, 2:41 AM
I hate maths but that is a cool poem all the same!! Presently we are doing integration and diferential equations in school and I go to sleep everytime the teacher enters!!
A 9!
A 9!
replying on Both Sided Acrostic by Bhaskaryya
5 Jan 2005, 7:38 PM
That was an excellent poem!1 I hope to reach that level someday..I am just a beginner.
Here is a parallel acrostic by my friend...
Treasuring the past I tired to stay in a distant desert, buT
He came and erased the tenebrous days from my memoiR
Only a few momentsâ feelings made us, âusâ from him and I
Marked with uncertainty our love stayed, hushed and virgiN.
Anticipating the recondite dream to bloom as a new epiC,
Smilingly, with open arms, always love waited on our waY
Loving a person with out seeing is not a simple committaL
Optimistically he waited till I revealed that I love him toO
Virtue of prayers must have forced us to divulge our luV
Else, how these feelings didnât get erased in the cruise of lifE
Serendipity is what that kept this relation together, alwayS
Time or space couldnât wreck a love carved deep in hearT
Revolving on the orbits of life, to see an eclipse I did wisH
I could feel emotions growing like a crescent to a full halO
Neglecting all the hurdles of life, love was declared for hiM
Capitulating in his arms, my spirit found complete euphoriA
Yearning to meet this eternal love I wait across seven seaS
Trincy loves thomas and thomas loves Trincy
Here is a parallel acrostic by my friend...
Treasuring the past I tired to stay in a distant desert, buT
He came and erased the tenebrous days from my memoiR
Only a few momentsâ feelings made us, âusâ from him and I
Marked with uncertainty our love stayed, hushed and virgiN.
Anticipating the recondite dream to bloom as a new epiC,
Smilingly, with open arms, always love waited on our waY
Loving a person with out seeing is not a simple committaL
Optimistically he waited till I revealed that I love him toO
Virtue of prayers must have forced us to divulge our luV
Else, how these feelings didnât get erased in the cruise of lifE
Serendipity is what that kept this relation together, alwayS
Time or space couldnât wreck a love carved deep in hearT
Revolving on the orbits of life, to see an eclipse I did wisH
I could feel emotions growing like a crescent to a full halO
Neglecting all the hurdles of life, love was declared for hiM
Capitulating in his arms, my spirit found complete euphoriA
Yearning to meet this eternal love I wait across seven seaS
Trincy loves thomas and thomas loves Trincy
on What I Do Know by PsydewaysTears
5 Jan 2005, 9:56 AM
Nice!!
replying on Both Sided Acrostic by Bhaskaryya
5 Jan 2005, 9:42 AM
I know it's AN ordeal. But there was no way I could edit it, so I was hoping you guyz would overlook it!! (Damn you!!)
By YARN, I mean to cover. (Yarns my soul...Covers or knits my soul...) That part makes sense though!
Thanks anyway!!
By YARN, I mean to cover. (Yarns my soul...Covers or knits my soul...) That part makes sense though!
Thanks anyway!!
on Sitting in a damp refrigerator box, wondering (ODE) Basque by zodiac
3 Jan 2005, 5:55 AM
How is that a Glosa?? Besides, I submitted one!!
on An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya
31 Dec 2004, 8:38 PM
I wrote that waaaay back!! So please comment accordingly. I know it's not good!!
Great work!