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The Mighty Brahmaputra (Free verse) by Bhaskaryya
Flickering upon it, the sunâs hued rays.
The mighty Brahmaputra, with its golden glaze,
Haunting all with its spectral blaze,
Flowed solely for weary minds to amaze.
Hackneyed with drudgery for days,
Still looking to swallow those words of faze,
I struggle to break free from this cerebral cage
Looking for a destination through the uncertain haze
Seeking escape from this taunting phase,
And once and for all, all memories erase,
I walk down the alien street and with sunken eyes gaze
At those blue waters, meandering with laze.
Watching it take its course with nothing to forage,
For a moment, I drift to my childhood days
Oh, such carefree were those youthful ways,
A hand to support, when your feet rummage.
But the winds must sway and so it sways,
Taking away forever, that once a blithe stage
Drifting away to the perplexing maze,
To write your name either on the blue or red page.
It was late, fading were those sunâs rays,
Yet, my eyes desired to linger and graze
At that ever so enchanting image,
But I had to move along my waysâ¦
And it was after many a passing days,
My mind was taken by utter daze,
When I read about that riverâs craze
And the city that its violent gushes did erase.
But the winds must sway, and so it sways
Forcing the mighty river to alter its ways,
Drifting away to the perplexing maze,
To write itâs name either on the blue or red page.
Then in my mind, this thought did braise,
The river and we humans sometime encounter the same maze
But with its colossal might, the river chose to raze
And wrote its name forever on the red page.
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Posted: January 7, 2005 8:28 PM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2005 8:28 PM PST
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