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Ode To The Fly In My Beer (Ode) by ChaseValentine
You dance,
body propelled by bossa nova,
across the lips of a warm Corona.
The buzz of rum,
hot on your breath -
you whisper to yourself, lost
in the Spanish cantations, the quick taps of the electric piano.
You fly unevenly (sometimes
in loop-de-loops) through the night
on tattered wings
that carry you from drink to drink
samba to samba
finding happiness only at the bottom
of an empty bottle.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6113
Posted: April 26, 2005 3:50 PM PDT; Last modified: April 26, 2005 3:50 PM PDT
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