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AL-NAAFIYSH (Free verse) by blacksoul Antisapation of death,
is worse than death itself.
Up the ladder:
Pin worms and cake.
Down the ladder:
Strap On
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Posted: December 25, 2004 7:36 AM PST; Last modified: December 25, 2004 7:36 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.615798 Overall Rank: 12446 Comments:
Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...
Anticipation**
Trite.
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I could comment on the saying, but you're getting at something here that I don't understand.
The word AL-NAAFIYSH means the soul.
I'm glad I asked instead of going off on some tangent of plagiarism as you saw happen on your other poem.
None of us can know death, except those who claim to have returned. If your father anticipates it, may he do so without fear. Merry Christmas.