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Untitled Sonnet #1 (Other) by Antwon
O wondrous lass, of whom I am so fond, Shall our acquaintance meet romantic end? Electric spark: the crisp emotion bond? Shall I ever to you be more than friend? Your sunbeam smile sets my heart alight; It's effortless, the way you heart-string me. My courage wanes, or else I'd call tonight Requesting partnership eternally. Devoted, true: I'd never look askance, At cheap and tawdry, hedonistic fun. But I cannot pawn friendship for romance? In my attempt for more, end up with none. Of my desires deep I dare not tell Though love's a flame one cannot ever quell.

Up the ladder: AL-NAAFIYSH
Down the ladder: Be My Girl

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5625
Weighted score: 4.614651
Overall Rank: 12453
Posted: May 11, 2002 1:52 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 1:52 AM PDT
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[4] Jill Stockinger @ 209.162.37.68 | 14-Jul-02/2:49 PM | Reply
Too many cliches.
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