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Be My Girl (Free verse) by disturbedone182
I have a confession to make If I do not, my heart will break I think about you all the time Even enough to make this stupid rhyme You are one of the greatest people I know My chance for you, I cannot blow You must have been sent from the heavens above For you have earned my eternal love You are there for me when I need most Speaking of you, I cannot help but boast Take my hand, be my guest Change my life with a simple, yes I have never felt a love so true A love I feel only for you A wonderful girl for me I have found I ask you this right here and now Please make me the luckiest guy in the world By saying that you will be my girl ...

Up the ladder: Untitled Sonnet #1
Down the ladder: Thousand Tears

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.75
Weighted score: 4.6125903
Overall Rank: 12449
Posted: August 27, 2002 6:54 PM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2002 6:54 PM PDT
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[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.9 | 28-Aug-02/12:25 PM | Reply
Wow! This is simple and to the point. Hell, I'll be your bitch. Do you speak Emotion instead of English also?
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