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Acrostic Terza Rima (Terza Rima) by Bhaskaryya
TO MY LOVE~~~~
Heavenly angels couldnât be more fair
As compared to you, my sweet sprite
Poetic imagination you capture with your eyes bare
Pixies dancing in the silvery moonlight
Yens not my soul as much as the look in your eyes
Beauty lies within those eyens bright.
If only those looks were for me to prize
Resplendence dazzling solely for my sake
Then I wouldnât bother if ever again the sun would rise
Hills might crumble, mountains might flake
Deserts might flood, snow clad poles might burn
And oceans might alter into a mere lake
Yet, for you my heart would yearn
Kindled forever would be my loveâs flame
And always my soul, to yours would turn.
So come, think not again, feel no shame
Today allow me to embrace you in my arms and
Upon your lips, let me forever engrave my name.
Rue not any longer my love, come and hold my hand
I shall steal you away forever to our very own dreamland.
Acrostic Message : HAPPY BIRTHDAY KASTURI
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Posted: December 26, 2004 9:38 AM PST; Last modified: December 26, 2004 9:38 AM PST
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