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An Allegory to No One

by MacFrantic

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 Oct 2005 · 2 comments

Here I will reveal a forest Thin, fibrous trees Twisting beneath a suburban canopy The sharpness of the landscape Obscures my dancing vision Here too we are animals still This stage So grey and deep Sheltering players Loud, foreign things

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[6] Dovina 28-Oct-05/9:33 AM Reply
How can you reveal this? And suburban conopy doesn't work for me. "Loud foreign things" does.
[n/a] ALChemy 30-Oct-05/6:13 AM Reply
Not really an allegory but I guess No One won't mind that.