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An Allegory to No One (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Here I will reveal a forest Thin, fibrous trees Twisting beneath a suburban canopy The sharpness of the landscape Obscures my dancing vision Here too we are animals still This stage So grey and deep Sheltering players Loud, foreign things

Up the ladder: Differences
Down the ladder: Mysteriously seized

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6339
Posted: October 27, 2005 9:35 PM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2005 9:35 PM PDT
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[6] Dovina @ 209.247.222.92 | 28-Oct-05/9:33 AM | Reply
How can you reveal this? And suburban conopy doesn't work for me. "Loud foreign things" does.
[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 30-Oct-05/6:13 AM | Reply
Not really an allegory but I guess No One won't mind that.
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