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Internet Inspiration (Dovina) revised (Free verse) by jroday
Lady poet whom I never met. We share a poetic bond; much respect. I appreciate your skills, your words I admire. May your flow of verses never retire. It's the little things you say, that tenderly touch my heart, when my world is torn apart. Is it just your way? Is it something that you know? Can you sense in me the feelings I don't know? Your poetry has helped me through frustration, heart-break sensation, expressiveness; lacked motivation, and most of all,temporary relief of my wife's death. I see in your poetry the simple woman that you are, strong and powerful. Smiling peaceful thoughts; happiness complete. Satisfied with your innerself, your not perfect, just perfectly happy. Your strong, intelligent enough to know what you can and can't change. You accept it and place it in God's hands. YOU ARE MY INTERNET INSPIRATION

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 5.2682066
Overall Rank: 3943
Posted: December 21, 2004 1:48 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2004 1:48 PM PST
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[10] blacksoul @ 204.215.34.123 | 21-Dec-04/2:09 PM | Reply
I'll give it another -10- because I know this man very well, and what he's going through.
If it was me I don't think i could handle it the way he does, but I give him the utmost respect.
[n/a] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 21-Dec-04/3:08 PM | Reply
Thank you for reposting this and for the kind sentiment.
[9] Bhaskaryya @ 61.0.144.80 | 30-Dec-04/9:18 AM | Reply
Very nice poem!! Why don't you put it under ODE???
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