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That One Time Last Summer, Remember? (Free verse) by jessicazee
First a berry stain
on your pine needled sole,
and you just say
"look at the fire I made"
It's a quick death,
a campfired moth.
Ash so light,
wings disappear,
flying, dying
again toward the canopy.
The shower drips all night,
mulberry trees
whisper, "please shake us"
"we need to let things go"
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Posted: December 11, 2004 12:41 AM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2004 12:41 AM PST
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