| Re: The Drop by auscot |
21-Dec-04/10:45 PM |
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What more do you need than commendation?? Not very hilarious bu a decent read.
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| Re: Recognition by nentwined |
21-Dec-04/10:46 PM |
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| Re: One-Man Act by Blindpoetry |
21-Dec-04/10:53 PM |
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Nah, I don't really like it. Doesn't flow too well and not too poetic either. A 4 for your efforts though.
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| Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
21-Dec-04/10:57 PM |
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I found the "THOU" thing pretty unnecessary as you really don't follow it up in the other cases. I won't say I hate but don't love it either. A 5!!
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| Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8 |
21-Dec-04/11:03 PM |
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The rhyme seems forced. You could have just written that in a free verse and expressed yourself better. Good effort since it's a Villanelle (They are hard, I admit) but not exactly classy!!
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| Re: 9/11 by TheDevil |
21-Dec-04/11:06 PM |
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A very immatured piece and nothing poetic whatsoever.
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| Re: keep on digging by nentwined |
21-Dec-04/11:11 PM |
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The first 2 lines rhyme while the later 3 donot. Don't you think the initial rhyme was unnecessary??
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| Re: Remembrance by dragonfly |
21-Dec-04/11:18 PM |
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I feel nostalgic too in a queer way!!! Nice work
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
21-Dec-04/11:23 PM |
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Powerfully expressed but the flow breaks here and there. Breaks out of the "Mediocre" tag but not all that classy either.
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| Re: Joanna by DR Limerick |
21-Dec-04/11:26 PM |
This is ot a limerick.
A limerick consists of 5 lines and has the rhyme scheme of aabba. Joanna and Spanners don't rhyme and this has only 3 lines. Not funny either. A 1.
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| Re: Interstellar Hell by PsydewaysTears |
21-Dec-04/11:29 PM |
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Nice work. Above the "Average".
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| Re: the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL? |
21-Dec-04/11:43 PM |
that makes you go insain... It's spelled INSANE.
either way im bringin you pain...Spelled BRINGING
and its all for my ...Spelled IT'S or IT IS.
Below average...a 3!!
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| Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8 |
22-Dec-04/3:24 AM |
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So did you visit my poems to analyse it and give a honest comment or just take out your spite coz' I said your poem isn't classy?? Do read my profile, I never claimed to write well. I know my poetry sucks. Besides, English is NOT my language and I am just 17. I just told you what I felt about your poem, I didn't take out any personal grudges. I am open to criticism but it should be done in a positive way, not insulted.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Dec-04/11:54 PM |
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My first attempt at Haikus. Wrote all these within an hour yesterday.
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| Re: there's no way out by oneglove |
22-Dec-04/11:57 PM |
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Not bad!! But what does AGAINS mean??
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| Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8 |
23-Dec-04/12:13 AM |
Why don't you just drop the arrogance?? People have the right to comment what they think?? I didn't say your poem SUCKS. I liked it just fine, but I though it could have been improved. Anything wrong witrh improvements???
Isn't this what the comment box is for.. To leave your honest views?? I am not here to please your vanity or prick it either. I just told you what I honestly thought to be true. And besides, I have read much classier villanelles. I'd never accept it if you say PERHAPS and DRIPS are perfect rhymes.
Come and tear my work apart. I'd appreciate it. But please stop taking out your spite on me. I am here to improve my poetry,not to share kick ass poems.
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| Re: Walk The Boy To Circles by horus8 |
23-Dec-04/4:24 AM |
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Happy Holidays to you, my good sir!!
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| Re: Possibilities by Nicholas Jones |
24-Dec-04/9:02 AM |
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| Re: Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
24-Dec-04/9:05 AM |
A Sestina, wow!! That's real tough!! I did one today but damn, this is million times better!! Do check me out if you could!!
10!!
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| Re: A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere |
26-Dec-04/9:01 AM |
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