poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bhaskaryya (21-40)

Comments byBhaskaryya, 21–40 back. Include replies

on Spotty Sun by Blindpoetry 27 Dec 2004, 9:16 PM
I don't really follow it well. The weaving of words, though not overly complicated, seems a bit confusing.
Can't say I like it, neither do I hate it.
on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2004, 10:18 PM
Not bad!!
on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry 28 Dec 2004, 10:20 PM
"Your going to jump my men"

Ain't it supposed to be YOU ARE??
on Storms by Jeremi B. Handrinos 28 Dec 2004, 10:21 PM
Very beautiful!!!!
on some deleted poem 28 Dec 2004, 10:23 PM
"what's wrong with me that there's air all around me and i still can't
breathE"

*There is supposed to be an E after breath.*

A little too childish! You could submit it under PIMPLE.
on two flies by suckmychucks 28 Dec 2004, 10:35 PM
That is NOT a limerick.

Limerick is supposed to be of 5 lines and follow therhyme scheme of aabba
on A Short Letter by Ranger 28 Dec 2004, 10:36 PM
Pretty nice!!
on Road Tripped by Blindpoetry 28 Dec 2004, 10:41 PM
There you are!!

Personally I don't bother much about votes. I appreciate comments more because it helps me know what exactly one thinks of my poem and it helps me improve.

A 9 from me.
on My Wife by Dovina 29 Dec 2004, 6:56 PM
HaHa!!! Great poem!! Very much like a breathe of fresh air on the site.
on Distance by Lifeboatman 29 Dec 2004, 7:00 PM
Awesome!!!
on some deleted poem 30 Dec 2004, 9:12 AM
Nice one!! Hope you ain't a real one!!
on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30 Dec 2004, 9:17 AM
BUTLERS**** You are referring to many butlers not just one. Hence no apostrophes!!
on Internet Inspiration (Dovina) revised by jroday 30 Dec 2004, 9:18 AM
Very nice poem!! Why don't you put it under ODE???
on An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya 31 Dec 2004, 8:38 PM
I wrote that waaaay back!! So please comment accordingly. I know it's not good!!
How is that a Glosa?? Besides, I submitted one!!
on What I Do Know by PsydewaysTears 5 Jan 2005, 9:56 AM
Nice!!
on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 6 Jan 2005, 2:41 AM
I hate maths but that is a cool poem all the same!! Presently we are doing integration and diferential equations in school and I go to sleep everytime the teacher enters!!

A 9!
on Fanboy by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2005, 8:34 PM
Nice :)
on AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul 8 Jan 2005, 8:46 AM
Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...
on AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul 8 Jan 2005, 8:52 AM
Anticipation**