| Re: Spotty Sun by Blindpoetry |
27-Dec-04/9:16 PM |
I don't really follow it well. The weaving of words, though not overly complicated, seems a bit confusing.
Can't say I like it, neither do I hate it.
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28-Dec-04/10:18 PM |
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| Re: Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:20 PM |
"Your going to jump my men"
Ain't it supposed to be YOU ARE??
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| Re: Storms by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
28-Dec-04/10:21 PM |
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28-Dec-04/10:23 PM |
"what's wrong with me that there's air all around me and i still can't
breathE"
*There is supposed to be an E after breath.*
A little too childish! You could submit it under PIMPLE.
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| Re: two flies by suckmychucks |
28-Dec-04/10:35 PM |
That is NOT a limerick.
Limerick is supposed to be of 5 lines and follow therhyme scheme of aabba
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| Re: A Short Letter by Ranger |
28-Dec-04/10:36 PM |
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| Re: Road Tripped by Blindpoetry |
28-Dec-04/10:41 PM |
There you are!!
Personally I don't bother much about votes. I appreciate comments more because it helps me know what exactly one thinks of my poem and it helps me improve.
A 9 from me.
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| Re: My Wife by Dovina |
29-Dec-04/6:56 PM |
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HaHa!!! Great poem!! Very much like a breathe of fresh air on the site.
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| Re: Distance by Lifeboatman |
29-Dec-04/7:00 PM |
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30-Dec-04/9:12 AM |
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Nice one!! Hope you ain't a real one!!
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| Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
30-Dec-04/9:17 AM |
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BUTLERS**** You are referring to many butlers not just one. Hence no apostrophes!!
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| Re: Internet Inspiration (Dovina) revised by jroday |
30-Dec-04/9:18 AM |
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Very nice poem!! Why don't you put it under ODE???
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| Re: An Ode To An Angel by Bhaskaryya |
31-Dec-04/8:38 PM |
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I wrote that waaaay back!! So please comment accordingly. I know it's not good!!
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| Re: Sitting in a damp refrigerator box, wondering (ODE) Basque by zodiac |
3-Jan-05/5:55 AM |
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How is that a Glosa?? Besides, I submitted one!!
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| Re: What I Do Know by PsydewaysTears |
5-Jan-05/9:56 AM |
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| Re: Math Poem 3 by Dovina |
6-Jan-05/2:41 AM |
I hate maths but that is a cool poem all the same!! Presently we are doing integration and diferential equations in school and I go to sleep everytime the teacher enters!!
A 9!
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| Re: Fanboy by Blindpoetry |
7-Jan-05/8:34 PM |
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| Re: AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul |
8-Jan-05/8:46 AM |
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Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...
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| Re: AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul |
8-Jan-05/8:52 AM |
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