Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy	10-Jan-06/11:28 AM
See what I mean. He's not sorry.
Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy	10-Jan-06/11:21 AM
Then tell him to argue, and to quit calling me a blathering moron and walking off. Do you think your entertainment should be free?
Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy	10-Jan-06/11:12 AM
You never played the peacemaker for zodiac and me. Is one of us not "good people"?
Re: the light of a truly bright day by digipoet	10-Jan-06/10:58 AM
I agree. But a clever twist would be nice - maybe, A bright cloudy day, or somesuch.
Re: Tulip by richa	10-Jan-06/10:52 AM
with neither a purse nor a name or with not a purse or a name
Re: Oh Verrazano by Joe-joe	10-Jan-06/10:37 AM
Maybe it should be "low wage" rather than "no wage." And maybe "fell from her" not "for her."
Re: a comment on What Matters by Dovina	10-Jan-06/10:16 AM
That's good! How do you find all this stuff?
Re: portrait of powerlessness by digipoet	9-Jan-06/8:37 PM
Try leaving off the last line, or make it the title.
Re: I, Ann Boleyn by http://mulberryfairy	9-Jan-06/8:30 PM
Funny
Re: a comment on Bloody Stools 'n' Butterflies by EAger to Offend	9-Jan-06/7:15 PM
They're not in the same ballgame. I think this one has something to say.
Re: Cocoon by Caducus	9-Jan-06/7:13 PM
You've caped all line beginnings except Line 4. Thirty two should be thirty-two. I like hso hoping/longing in the last few lines.
Re: Reckoning by <~>	9-Jan-06/7:07 PM
"I have ifs, and you have me," What a way to live. Yet it's too often true.
Re: Uncontrolled scribblings one luch break by Nicholas Jones	9-Jan-06/7:02 PM
Get your grammar somewhere close to common acceptance, and I'll say something about what you said.
Re: [] by Prince of Void	9-Jan-06/7:00 PM
I hate all this giddy positive attitude psychology in the face of despair. Can't you just show the empty abomination in everything and the voidness of even thinking of anything as good or bad?
Re: The Dark Days of Aristotle by somemorepoetry	9-Jan-06/6:49 PM
The world was too populated or Aristotle, and today not populated enough, some say. Think I'll go east, back to the green hills of Tennessee.
Re: a comment on What Matters by Dovina	8-Jan-06/4:05 PM
Good guess, but he could be King Kong for all it matters.
Re: Pledge by http://mulberryfairy	8-Jan-06/4:04 PM
This is a comical turn on what we all do as writers. I laughed at myself, and that makes it a therapeutic read.
Re: Flicking by INTRANSIT	8-Jan-06/3:59 PM
Not sure apex is what you mean, try spiral. And maybe curves should be curve. Otherwise good.
Re: do i know you? by daggatolar	8-Jan-06/3:53 PM
This is good except for Line 2, which can go, I think.
Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy	6-Jan-06/11:36 AM
I thought, mistakenly it seems, that you wanted constructively intended feedback. I only said it should be a complete sentence because all the other sentences in the poem are complete. Having this oddball "sentence" seemed jarring to me. If that's bad feedback, then what can I say?