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Bloody Stools 'n' Butterflies (Free verse) by EAger to Offend Sex is great, death is better
Press passion to the letter
Body's shot but mind is fitter
Celestial signs found in the shitter
Fear can make the wetness wetter
Wine is fine but, death is better.
Up the ladder:
spiritual living
Down the ladder:
the battle for troy
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Posted: January 9, 2006 12:53 AM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2006 12:53 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.904638 Overall Rank: 9832 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
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9-Jan-06/3:32 AM
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See all of Dark Angel's poems and then realize you're outmatched.
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.104
> ALChemy
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9-Jan-06/7:15 PM
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They're not in the same ballgame. I think this one has something to say.
Too eager to offend, and not eager enougth to produce stimulating poetry.
"Wacky".
Celestial signs in the shitter...... yes, indeed I've had a few of those. A charming little ode.
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