poemranker ::Bloody Stools 'n' Butterflies by EAger to Offend

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Free verse № 136530

Bloody Stools 'n' Butterflies

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Jan 2006 · 5 comments

Sex is great, death is better Press passion to the letter Body's shot but mind is fitter Celestial signs found in the shitter Fear can make the wetness wetter Wine is fine but, death is better.

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5 comments

[n/a] ALChemy 9-Jan-06/3:32 AM Reply
See all of Dark Angel's poems and then realize you're outmatched.
[7] Dovina › ALChemy 9-Jan-06/7:15 PM Reply
They're not in the same ballgame. I think this one has something to say.
[1] cyan9 9-Jan-06/6:23 AM Reply
Too eager to offend, and not eager enougth to produce stimulating poetry.
[5] zodiac 9-Jan-06/8:25 AM Reply
"Wacky".
[8] Edna Sweetlove 21-Jun-06/3:41 AM Reply
Celestial signs in the shitter...... yes, indeed I've had a few of those. A charming little ode.