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do i know you? (Free verse) by daggatolar
do i know you? a face is a lie to another face we only forget to run the memory away we become mad and faces on thier own unrecognise us

Up the ladder: The Pseudo-Portraitist
Down the ladder: Pills

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6666
Posted: January 8, 2006 11:47 AM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2006 11:47 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 209.247.222.97 | 8-Jan-06/3:53 PM | Reply
This is good except for Line 2, which can go, I think.
[6] zodiac @ 209.193.18.233 | 8-Jan-06/8:32 PM | Reply
their. Good one.
[9] cyan9 @ 217.40.63.105 | 9-Jan-06/6:28 AM | Reply
This looks and even sounds like it has a meaning or is expressing something, in fact on 2nd read I think I got it. Like the unrecognizing part, in fact its growing on me, especially now the title. As a poem it is not too hot, but it stimulates and has drawn me in and conjured images and thoughts much more than most poems.
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