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do i know you? (Free verse) by daggatolar

do i know you? a face is a lie to another face we only forget to run the memory away we become mad and faces on thier own unrecognise us

Dovina 8-Jan-06/3:53 PM
This is good except for Line 2, which can go, I think.




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