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do i know you? (Free verse) by daggatolar

do i know you? a face is a lie to another face we only forget to run the memory away we become mad and faces on thier own unrecognise us

cyan9 9-Jan-06/6:28 AM
This looks and even sounds like it has a meaning or is expressing something, in fact on 2nd read I think I got it. Like the unrecognizing part, in fact its growing on me, especially now the title. As a poem it is not too hot, but it stimulates and has drawn me in and conjured images and thoughts much more than most poems.




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