Re: You wash up, I forget. by Bachus	10-Sep-04/11:05 PM
I'm falling asleep.
Re: i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus	10-Sep-04/11:01 PM
Boring.
Re: a comment on The Serpent People by horus8	25-Aug-04/10:03 PM
Yes - Powerfully boring - could be much better.
Re: I CANNOT FUCKAT2POEMS by daggatolar	10-Aug-04/5:49 PM
Bravo - well done.
Re: a comment on Navy Pier by Doug	10-Aug-04/5:36 PM
i don't know - what is spledor? If you had half a mind for words or the tragedy of their loss - you would cry for our lack of thought and hope!!!!!!!
Re: a comment on Navy Pier by Doug	10-Aug-04/5:24 PM
Have you been to Chicago in August?It's both hot and breezy - at moments sticky and hot , yet at other moments windy, mild and mute.It causes changes in moods and thought quite often.
Re: a comment on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer	30-Jun-04/8:53 PM
My balls are small, my words are slight, I nearly creamed with zoddie's delight. Painkiller,fuck you,fuck Zodiac,Fuck Horus8(gay),fuck poemstanker,and a big, triple larger than life fuck you to godswife.So kiss my American ass you defeated Scotch and as long as your there, please lick my hangin American crotch!
Re: a comment on Captain Napkin Starring In "The Passion Of Napkin" by horus8	29-Jun-04/9:24 PM
I wish I could touch your neck ,just one time jerimi.Your so good..maybe when I awake?Maybe when I fall?Either way I'll be by you.Just one time.Can't wait u little biatch.I'll be dreaming of u. BYE
Re: Captain Napkin Starring In "The Passion Of Napkin" by horus8	28-Jun-04/4:29 PM
How bout flush this poem instead. Sincerely:( Pale Jizzbomb
Re: a comment on Stuffy by horus8	26-Jun-04/4:15 PM
It is almost sad I like this attempt at poetry,yet despise the author and his sad attempt at neo-orange county nazi drivle.Try again jerimi handjob.....get over yourself!
Re: a comment on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer	26-Jun-04/3:32 PM
Fair affirmation pain killer, we'll accept your rendition. Your much more plausible than the homophobic mixture of M&M and Greg Brady called horus8 or jerimi handjobolis or Indiana Jones and the fucking temple of nice hotel rooms.jerimi is so suburban he makes my great uncle from Topeka look ghetto.Jerimi if I ever see you in my neighborhood I'll kick you to sleep!I'll give you my address if you feel the need, you wished for fish story of lower- middle class America!Your a complete and utter fraud,you know as much about poverty and death as I know of gated developments and Orange County,CA.You and your dad in a high speed chase,yeah right...a high speed chase to the Target to get your mom some tampons you fuckin' poser!Please stop posting your puerile attempts at urban poetry on scarce web space you arcadian jackass.
Re: 9/11 Fareinheit Missed by peaceseeker	26-Jun-04/1:39 PM
This poem is irreproachable in regards to it's softness and somewhat unhindered intellection of innocence. I like the feeling behind your words,finespun,yet basic and graceful. Polish it up just a half a hair and it would be a 10 and a half. Either or well done.
Re: a comment on Tattooed by DR Limerick	25-Jun-04/10:05 PM
There once was an ass from Sheffieid, Who's keyboard's buttons were concealed, save the L,O,Y and B, He tried to press others you see, but, blobby blob blob was all it would yield.
Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac	24-Jun-04/7:23 PM
Oh my god zodiac!Your music was'nt that bad, save the recording quality.I really did'nt even give it ten seconds, because it was made by you.After revisiting...could use a bit more soul,a bit more love,maybe a bit more honesty,but who am I?A failed poet,with no sense of taste or talent. P.S. I like Counting Crows or I think I used to like them?
Re: a comment on Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer	24-Jun-04/1:22 PM
How do you know what I do for a living? Strange,but my bodyguards are sheep lickers and I'm paid with dirty bums. Not so lucrative though.
Re: Thoughts Asunder by wilco	23-Jun-04/7:02 PM
One of your best poems.-9-
Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac	23-Jun-04/2:58 PM
pain killer me and zoddy are two very different people, believe me!And how would he scare me?By typeing something nasty(oh my). I agree his music is.... well his music,but he has a definite knowledge of poetry.I just wanted his honest opinion without all the insults.He really is'nt a bad person once you sift through all the pretentious bullshit.
Re: Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-04/2:36 PM
How about "Go fuck yourself motherfucker,goddamn cunt-bitch-WHORE"? Brilliant!
Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer	23-Jun-04/2:24 PM
I quite agree!You and your poetry are actualized shit.I understand the jest of your statement,but that's no excuse to lower yourself to the same level.Besides I highly doubt you know anything about the essence of blackness, being the pasty scotsman you are.Good job jackass you created nine lines of artless, barbarous shit.
Re: a comment on Navy Pier by Doug	20-Jun-04/1:34 AM
Thanks Shin Shuu that is good advice i'll amend it a tad. Thanks again, Doug