Yes - Powerfully boring - could be much better.

i don't know - what is spledor?
If you had half a mind for words or the tragedy of their loss -
you would cry for our lack of thought and hope!!!!!!!

Have you been to Chicago in August?It's both hot and breezy - at moments sticky and hot , yet at other moments windy, mild and mute.It causes changes in moods and thought quite often.

My balls are small, my words are slight,
I nearly creamed with zoddie's delight.
Painkiller,fuck you,fuck Zodiac,Fuck Horus8(gay),fuck poemstanker,and a big, triple larger than life fuck you to godswife.So kiss my American ass you defeated Scotch and as long as your there, please lick my hangin American crotch!

I wish I could touch your neck ,just one time jerimi.Your so good..maybe when I awake?Maybe when I fall?Either way I'll be by you.Just one time.Can't wait u little biatch.I'll be dreaming of u.
BYE

It is almost sad I like this attempt at poetry,yet despise the author and his sad attempt at neo-orange county nazi drivle.Try again jerimi handjob.....get over yourself!

Fair affirmation pain killer, we'll accept your rendition.
Your much more plausible than the homophobic mixture of M&M and Greg Brady called horus8 or jerimi handjobolis or Indiana Jones and the fucking temple of nice hotel rooms.jerimi is so suburban he makes my great uncle from Topeka look ghetto.Jerimi if I ever see you in my neighborhood I'll kick you to sleep!I'll give you my address if you feel the need, you wished for fish story of lower- middle class America!Your a complete and utter fraud,you know as much about poverty and death as I know of gated developments and Orange County,CA.You and your dad in a high speed chase,yeah right...a high speed chase to the Target to get your mom some tampons you fuckin' poser!Please stop posting your puerile attempts at urban poetry on scarce web space you arcadian jackass.

There once was an ass from Sheffieid,
Who's keyboard's buttons were concealed,
save the L,O,Y and B,
He tried to press others you see,
but, blobby blob blob was all it would yield.

Oh my god zodiac!Your music was'nt that bad, save the recording quality.I really did'nt even give it ten seconds, because it was made by you.After revisiting...could use a bit more soul,a bit more love,maybe a bit more honesty,but who am I?A failed poet,with no sense of taste or talent.

P.S. I like Counting Crows or I think I used to like them?

How do you know what I do for a living? Strange,but my bodyguards
are sheep lickers and I'm paid with dirty bums.
Not so lucrative though.

pain killer me and zoddy are two very different people, believe me!And how would he scare me?By typeing something nasty(oh my).
I agree his music is.... well his music,but he has a definite
knowledge of poetry.I just wanted his honest opinion without all
the insults.He really is'nt a bad person once you sift through all the pretentious bullshit.

Thanks Shin Shuu that is good advice i'll amend it a tad.

Thanks again,
Doug