poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Doug (41-60) and replies

Comments byDoug, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Navy Pier by Doug 18 Jun 2004, 10:35 PM
Thanks Zodiac!
I'll redress it a bit and put it back up.
I appreciate your criticism.

Thanks,
Doug
replying on Litany by zodiac 18 Jun 2004, 9:12 PM
Zodiac,will u check out my poem "Navy Pier" and critique it for me?But please don't insult me.

Thanks,
doug
replying on Origins by Doug 18 Jun 2004, 11:45 AM
Good idea,I'm gonna work on it.
Thanks Shin Shuu,I appreciate your help.
replying on Litany by zodiac 17 Jun 2004, 10:25 PM
Improve & should'nt - sorry:)
replying on Litany by zodiac 17 Jun 2004, 8:15 PM
O.K. I'll stop if you just try to be a bit kinder to me and others.You are right though in the future I will refrain from insults (if at all possible),but you shuold'nt attack people and expect them to laugh at it everytime it happens.In parting I will inprove my manners,just don't attack me.I can take criticism
even harsh criticism,but not personal attacks.


Thanks,
Doug
replying on Litany by zodiac 17 Jun 2004, 7:48 PM
O.K. Zoddy from Marion,N.C.?
I guess your right about the punctuation,but terribly wrong about my I P address and it being on uberconservative hate pages, so fuck you and your sad attempt at slander.

Have a good night,
Doug

replying on Litany by zodiac 17 Jun 2004, 12:35 PM
If I wrote that you have a twelve inch penis and have been cured of your intense case of frotteurism!
Besides if I was on this site in May at least the last four digits of "my" I P address would be different if not all,you
silly mooncalf.
replying on The Freemasons by Bachus 16 Jun 2004, 8:58 PM
Thanks "god's wife",I'm flattered by your crush on me.
replying on Bowling For Turpentine by horus8 16 Jun 2004, 8:05 PM
Zody are you trying to be funny or are you actually an unbalanced
,pederastic underwit?
on The Freemasons by Bachus 16 Jun 2004, 7:35 PM
Are you actually serious?What is this delirious drivel
supposed to be anyway?Does Elvis live in your trailer park?
Did he help you compose this daft hypothesis?
Though I rather enjoyed reading it.

Thanks
replying on Origins by Doug 16 Jun 2004, 7:03 PM
Thank you very little zodiac.I look foward to more of your rambling comments in the not so near future.I might actualy take heed of our nasty dialogue, if it were not for the fact of you being a talentless,persnickety grammar snob.
And it is almost sad you can't see Perfection,I've spotted it many times and Hope to see it again.

Thanks again,
Doug
replying on Windfall by wilco 15 Jun 2004, 10:07 PM
Yeah,totally ace!You delusional fool.
Since I have no sense of spelling I'll decline further comments toward the almighty jimmy sodaiak.


P.S. zoddy find a new word - onanist is so stale!
replying on Windfall by wilco 15 Jun 2004, 9:47 PM
So sorry for my lack of spelling skills,but it seems there are certain mean - spirited people who cause me to type a bit quicker.Zodiac, I have no "music" of my own,because I'm smart enough to know if my music really is cancererous or not,I have no misconceptions like yourself!Please feel free to be mute!
on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco 15 Jun 2004, 9:33 PM
Not so bad.
on Litany by zodiac 15 Jun 2004, 8:52 PM
I checked your website out - wow -your music is worse than your sad attempt at prose!My ears are still bleeding!Please spare us, become a forest ranger or something!
replying on Windfall by wilco 15 Jun 2004, 8:42 PM
OMG,I can't believe "god's wife" actually made since for once.
on A Chance to Say Goodbye by TLRufener 15 Jun 2004, 8:38 PM
I wish "god's wife" would read her own "poetry" a little more often,instead of dashing other's hope for being heard.
on Thin Blood by Rodavlas 15 Jun 2004, 8:29 PM
So graphic!I hope your o.k.
seriously.
on You can seize my smile by Prince of Void 15 Jun 2004, 8:10 PM
Not bad,but you need to use a more compact, yet broader range of words,maybe something that flows just a tad better.And by the way never take "god's wife's" sad caption as being an actual person's opinion.
Keep putting your words on paper!
on Girl and a Drugstore Novel by snacktime 15 Jun 2004, 7:43 PM
Better than anything "god's wife" could dream of putting on paper!Don't let his or her self loathing stop you from self expression.Keep writing how or what you feel.