| Re: a comment on Navy Pier by Doug |
18-Jun-04/10:35 PM |
Thanks Zodiac!
I'll redress it a bit and put it back up.
I appreciate your criticism.
Thanks,
Doug
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| Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac |
18-Jun-04/9:12 PM |
Zodiac,will u check out my poem "Navy Pier" and critique it for me?But please don't insult me.
Thanks,
doug
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| Re: a comment on Origins by Doug |
18-Jun-04/11:45 AM |
Good idea,I'm gonna work on it.
Thanks Shin Shuu,I appreciate your help.
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| Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac |
17-Jun-04/10:25 PM |
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Improve & should'nt - sorry:)
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| Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac |
17-Jun-04/8:15 PM |
O.K. I'll stop if you just try to be a bit kinder to me and others.You are right though in the future I will refrain from insults (if at all possible),but you shuold'nt attack people and expect them to laugh at it everytime it happens.In parting I will inprove my manners,just don't attack me.I can take criticism
even harsh criticism,but not personal attacks.
Thanks,
Doug
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| Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac |
17-Jun-04/7:48 PM |
O.K. Zoddy from Marion,N.C.?
I guess your right about the punctuation,but terribly wrong about my I P address and it being on uberconservative hate pages, so fuck you and your sad attempt at slander.
Have a good night,
Doug
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| Re: a comment on Litany by zodiac |
17-Jun-04/12:35 PM |
If I wrote that you have a twelve inch penis and have been cured of your intense case of frotteurism!
Besides if I was on this site in May at least the last four digits of "my" I P address would be different if not all,you
silly mooncalf.
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| Re: a comment on The Freemasons by Bachus |
16-Jun-04/8:58 PM |
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Thanks "god's wife",I'm flattered by your crush on me.
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| Re: a comment on Bowling For Turpentine by horus8 |
16-Jun-04/8:05 PM |
Zody are you trying to be funny or are you actually an unbalanced
,pederastic underwit?
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| Re: The Freemasons by Bachus |
16-Jun-04/7:35 PM |
Are you actually serious?What is this delirious drivel
supposed to be anyway?Does Elvis live in your trailer park?
Did he help you compose this daft hypothesis?
Though I rather enjoyed reading it.
Thanks
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| Re: a comment on Origins by Doug |
16-Jun-04/7:03 PM |
Thank you very little zodiac.I look foward to more of your rambling comments in the not so near future.I might actualy take heed of our nasty dialogue, if it were not for the fact of you being a talentless,persnickety grammar snob.
And it is almost sad you can't see Perfection,I've spotted it many times and Hope to see it again.
Thanks again,
Doug
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| Re: a comment on Windfall by wilco |
15-Jun-04/10:07 PM |
Yeah,totally ace!You delusional fool.
Since I have no sense of spelling I'll decline further comments toward the almighty jimmy sodaiak.
P.S. zoddy find a new word - onanist is so stale!
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| Re: a comment on Windfall by wilco |
15-Jun-04/9:47 PM |
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So sorry for my lack of spelling skills,but it seems there are certain mean - spirited people who cause me to type a bit quicker.Zodiac, I have no "music" of my own,because I'm smart enough to know if my music really is cancererous or not,I have no misconceptions like yourself!Please feel free to be mute!
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| Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
15-Jun-04/9:33 PM |
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| Re: Litany by zodiac |
15-Jun-04/8:52 PM |
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I checked your website out - wow -your music is worse than your sad attempt at prose!My ears are still bleeding!Please spare us, become a forest ranger or something!
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| Re: a comment on Windfall by wilco |
15-Jun-04/8:42 PM |
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OMG,I can't believe "god's wife" actually made since for once.
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| Re: A Chance to Say Goodbye by TLRufener |
15-Jun-04/8:38 PM |
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I wish "god's wife" would read her own "poetry" a little more often,instead of dashing other's hope for being heard.
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| Re: Thin Blood by Rodavlas |
15-Jun-04/8:29 PM |
So graphic!I hope your o.k.
seriously.
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| Re: You can seize my smile by Prince of Void |
15-Jun-04/8:10 PM |
Not bad,but you need to use a more compact, yet broader range of words,maybe something that flows just a tad better.And by the way never take "god's wife's" sad caption as being an actual person's opinion.
Keep putting your words on paper!
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| Re: Girl and a Drugstore Novel by snacktime |
15-Jun-04/7:43 PM |
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Better than anything "god's wife" could dream of putting on paper!Don't let his or her self loathing stop you from self expression.Keep writing how or what you feel.
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