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Thin Blood (Lyric) by Rodavlas I'm planning to thin-out my blood tonight
I'm taking some pills with cheap red wine
Black and White photos of your blue eyes
Head in my hands cause you used to be mine
I'm shaking sweaty chills tonight
Twisitng in bed, doing lefts and rights
Take another swig of my Miller Lite
I'm planning to thin-out my blood tonight.
(chorus)
Take a blade to my arms
Slice the viens in my thighs
Take a knife to the heart
Take a bullet to the brain
To my arms, to my thighs, to my heart.
Up the ladder:
A dream of a fruit-gun
Down the ladder:
Married
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Posted: June 14, 2004 7:18 PM PDT; Last modified: June 14, 2004 7:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.65 Overall Rank: 559 Comments:
take the second half of the second verse and put the rest back into the word-pile.
And the last line could work too - just the idea of it; toasting bodyparts. could make a memorable song - but not another suicide note.
So graphic!I hope your o.k.
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Exactly right.
You deserve to live.