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Girl and a Drugstore Novel (Prose Poem) by snacktime
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Such repetition! Pacing endlessly with her arms clenched and twisting,
A sorry attempt at exercise to ease the boredom; fingers sandpaper-
yellowed
From too many old yesterday pages. Cosmetic literature
Meant to pretty up the mind and hide those pesky disfigurements --
To force outcries of More! and Sleepless!; she reads hidden
Skittering pages under thick covers, repeating words soundless
As though they are dying treasures. They are dying treasures.
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Dying treasures, and old monarchs with backs stooped and curved
Like death-scythes, where the form indicates the fate.
Too long, too old, and they die out for the younger king,
Bland and colourless-brief. A story about kings, then,
She decides, to honour the fading one who wriggles on his throne,
And she all shrouded in a dirty quilt is a woman in a tapestry,
Watching and not watching, eyes glaring past the real.
III
The real is not real. In her knit-woven figure she sees
Only this entrancement -- enchantment -- and articulate men go hungry
and are impaled
And her finger has a papercut sympathy wound. The words die with the
knights,
Useless, coughing undignified on the carpets. Sanguine bloodrush, pain--
No better way to say that in her limited vocabulary! The pulp-pages
Enhance her. Fealty, for plain-faced kings. Has she sworn it to someone
worse? Words drain.
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Drain out like blood, ran-through blood, and her hands stained yellow
still,
Too bad no jaundice comes from swordplay or wordplay.
More wounds, puddling, coagulating, escaping through stone-cracks.
Rampart, temperament, lunule,
Embrasure. Embrace? Sure, she thinks, wanting that changeable king
Though he only watches with cool illiterate detachment and does not
See the walls. In her heart she loves this uncaring destroyer best.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6229
Posted: June 15, 2004 11:19 AM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2004 11:28 AM PDT
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If this poem were a picnic VioletSuede would have eaten it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!