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Veracious Flames (Free verse) by Evening
The shadows can be anything I want, but truth remains
The flames a hot breath, but they burn just the same
and the fragments of bliss which were shared could be the whole
But the memories will not recede, though now the evidence fades away
And inevitably, unsaid and undone haunt again
Though the opportunity is forever lost
I decide to carry the heavy urn and spread
the ashes among the young, growing trees
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Posted: June 30, 2004 7:15 PM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2004 7:15 PM PDT
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Shadows can be anything I want
Flames a hot breath
Fragments of bliss
Memories remain though
Evidence fade
The undone haunts again
Opportunity lost
I carry the heavy urn
Spread ashes among the young,
Growing trees