poemranker ::I CANNOT FUCKAT2POEMS by daggatolar

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Free verse № 110265

I CANNOT FUCKAT2POEMS

by daggatolar

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 Aug 2004 · 2 comments

I cannot fuck at two poems At the headsame time For art is not like the heart Arteries , veins, to flow At more than one pour Like the pen is But not possible at the pour Of semen Like love can be at two Three, four, five Let me first die I cannot live to lie At art- The effort to erase you From inside of me. Dagga Tolar (C).

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[7] Dovina 10-Aug-04/11:36 AM Reply
You don't need to sing or sign your name at the bottom, dagga, sir. Your dame has sighed or sung it already. Five, really?
[8] Doug 10-Aug-04/5:49 PM Reply
Bravo - well done.