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I CANNOT FUCKAT2POEMS (Free verse) by daggatolar
I cannot fuck at two poems At the headsame time For art is not like the heart Arteries , veins, to flow At more than one pour Like the pen is But not possible at the pour Of semen Like love can be at two Three, four, five Let me first die I cannot live to lie At art- The effort to erase you From inside of me. Dagga Tolar (C).

Up the ladder: On Golden Bond
Down the ladder: Oblivion

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5190
Posted: August 10, 2004 8:16 AM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2004 8:16 AM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 10-Aug-04/11:36 AM | Reply
You don't need to sing or sign your name at the bottom, dagga, sir. Your dame has sighed or sung it already. Five, really?
[8] Doug @ 64.12.116.70 | 10-Aug-04/5:49 PM | Reply
Bravo - well done.
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