| Re: Ayudame (Help Me) by | Broken | |
27-Jun-04/6:28 AM |
first line of second stanza.. i think it shld be 'lied to'...
but as i said before... i like it...
agree with shin shuu tt the use of said word made it better...
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| Re: a comment on Lost by arduinn |
27-Jun-04/6:23 AM |
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glad tt i got the msg across.. thanx
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| Re: a comment on Black Rose by arduinn |
27-Jun-04/6:22 AM |
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| Re: Cool In The Army by wilco |
25-Jun-04/8:55 AM |
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| Re: | Broken Memory | by | Broken | |
25-Jun-04/8:48 AM |
his lost. think about it..
don't quite like the second and last stanza, though...
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| Re: a comment on Black Rose by arduinn |
25-Jun-04/8:40 AM |
No, thank you... I'm happy with the way I am...
Thanks for the comment and 10 nonetheless..
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| Re: TEENAGERS LIFE by jessicasgurl |
24-Jun-04/6:53 AM |
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i agree with the points you laid out but maybe you can improve on your spelling? the structure wasn't there as well... so...
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| Re: No choice in the matter by cedand1 |
21-Jun-04/11:33 PM |
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dude.. you are good. keep it up...
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| Re: Deja Vu by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
19-Jun-04/6:02 AM |
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
17-Jun-04/1:19 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Lost by arduinn |
17-Jun-04/1:08 AM |
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hahaha.. i do enjoy watching Star Wars..
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| Re: Love by pshah4life |
12-Jun-04/9:16 PM |
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Too bland for me. Sorry..
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| Re: a comment on Black Rose by arduinn |
12-Jun-04/7:58 PM |
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that doesn't tell me why you don't like it...
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| Re: a comment on Lost by arduinn |
12-Jun-04/7:50 PM |
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I find that you are hard to satisfy but it's a good thing.. Thanx for finding the time to comment...
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| Re: a comment on Lost by arduinn |
12-Jun-04/7:45 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Lost by arduinn |
12-Jun-04/7:22 PM |
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ok.. i get what you mean... thanx
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| Re: a comment on Lost by arduinn |
12-Jun-04/7:21 PM |
English is the language widely spoken here but Malay is my native language... If you don't mind me asking, why did you ask?
How did you know about this Malay language anyway?
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| Re: Wedding Day by Caducus |
12-Jun-04/8:51 AM |
Brought up nice images when I read this but I have to agree with the things Intransit pointed out...
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| Re: a comment on Fool by arduinn |
11-Jun-04/11:49 PM |
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i'll do that.. but give me some time ya.. thanx
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
11-Jun-04/9:24 AM |
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