Poemranker [20 most recent comments by arduinn (21-40) and replies]

on Ayudame (Help Me) by | Broken | 27 Jun 2004, 6:28 AM

first line of second stanza.. i think it shld be 'lied to'...

but as i said before... i like it...

agree with shin shuu tt the use of said word made it better...

replying on Lost by arduinn 27 Jun 2004, 6:23 AM

glad tt i got the msg across.. thanx

replying on Black Rose by arduinn 27 Jun 2004, 6:22 AM

hey.. thanx dudette..

on Cool In The Army by wilco 25 Jun 2004, 8:55 AM

=D

on | Broken Memory | by | Broken | 25 Jun 2004, 8:48 AM

his lost. think about it..

don't quite like the second and last stanza, though...

replying on Black Rose by arduinn 25 Jun 2004, 8:40 AM

No, thank you... I'm happy with the way I am...

Thanks for the comment and 10 nonetheless..

on TEENAGERS LIFE by jessicasgurl 24 Jun 2004, 6:53 AM

i agree with the points you laid out but maybe you can improve on your spelling? the structure wasn't there as well... so...

on No choice in the matter by cedand1 21 Jun 2004, 11:33 PM

dude.. you are good. keep it up...

on Deja Vu by Jeremi B. Handrinos 19 Jun 2004, 6:02 AM

Wicked..

on Old Friends by sliver 17 Jun 2004, 1:19 AM

Great flow of words..

replying on Lost by arduinn 17 Jun 2004, 1:08 AM

hahaha.. i do enjoy watching Star Wars..

on Love by pshah4life 12 Jun 2004, 9:16 PM

Too bland for me. Sorry..

replying on Black Rose by arduinn 12 Jun 2004, 7:58 PM

that doesn't tell me why you don't like it...

replying on Lost by arduinn 12 Jun 2004, 7:50 PM

I find that you are hard to satisfy but it's a good thing.. Thanx for finding the time to comment...

replying on Lost by arduinn 12 Jun 2004, 7:45 PM

oh and thanx for the ten

replying on Lost by arduinn 12 Jun 2004, 7:22 PM

ok.. i get what you mean... thanx

replying on Lost by arduinn 12 Jun 2004, 7:21 PM

English is the language widely spoken here but Malay is my native language... If you don't mind me asking, why did you ask?

How did you know about this Malay language anyway?

on Wedding Day by Caducus 12 Jun 2004, 8:51 AM

Brought up nice images when I read this but I have to agree with the things Intransit pointed out...

replying on Fool by arduinn 11 Jun 2004, 11:49 PM

i'll do that.. but give me some time ya.. thanx

on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin 11 Jun 2004, 9:24 AM

smooth