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Love (Free verse) by pshah4life
The feeling that canât be said
Or express enough in words
The one who is perfect in every way
Causing your stomach full of birds
The time your mind is lost in the thought
Of that certain special one,
Which leaves your stomach in a knot
Until those thoughts are done
The days that she walks past you
And grins her beautiful smile
You wish your feelings for her she knew
And you stare at her for awhile
You want to tell your friends the news
But not for a word to get out
To tell the trustworthy friends you choose
That she's the one you cannot live without
The feeling that will make you change
And is symbolized with a dove
Its hard to explain which is really strange
But the word for it is love.
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Weighted score: 4.552989
Overall Rank: 12669
Posted: June 12, 2004 6:46 PM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2004 6:46 PM PDT
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