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Love (Free verse) by pshah4life
The feeling that can’t be said Or express enough in words The one who is perfect in every way Causing your stomach full of birds The time your mind is lost in the thought Of that certain special one, Which leaves your stomach in a knot Until those thoughts are done The days that she walks past you And grins her beautiful smile You wish your feelings for her she knew And you stare at her for awhile You want to tell your friends the news But not for a word to get out To tell the trustworthy friends you choose That she's the one you cannot live without The feeling that will make you change And is symbolized with a dove Its hard to explain which is really strange But the word for it is love.

Up the ladder: You
Down the ladder: life and rap

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.25
Weighted score: 4.552989
Overall Rank: 12667
Posted: June 12, 2004 6:46 PM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2004 6:46 PM PDT
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Comments:
[0] god'swife @ 4.232.69.220 | 12-Jun-04/6:58 PM | Reply
Shut up.
[3] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 12-Jun-04/7:02 PM | Reply
There isn't enough accessible chilled white wine in my house currently for me to put my pee pee on your poeme and hump it furless, but hold this and I'll try.
[n/a] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.16 | 12-Jun-04/8:15 PM | Reply
should be under the "pimple" catagory, no vote
[2] arduinn @ 165.21.83.230 | 12-Jun-04/9:16 PM | Reply
Too bland for me. Sorry..
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